First try at homemade BDSM movie production

[petelobo]

Two more things to consider. One is controlling her by grabbing a handful of hair. Pulling her head back before whipping her front. Also, I find a mirror is really nice for girls who like to show off. Grab her hair and turn her to see herself all marked up in the mirror. I understand your need for anonymity, so maybe that won't work for you, but see how creative you can get solving that problem without completely hiding one of the most important parts of your victim--her facial expressions. True she can demonstrate a lot with her body. But a good blindfold and a gag can make the face largely unrecognizable while still allowing it to express. Also, if you are doing this for yourselves and not planning to distribute it, shoot scenes full nude and face uncovered, then re-shoot them. I have found that panties pulled down over the head to cover eyes, combined with a ball gag or cleave gag is a quick-change option to reshoot a scene.

[Hey You]

Hmmm interesting ideas. Will consider quite few of them.

Was planing to use flogger with multiple tails and maybe a cable for single whip as it adds to realism as a instrument i found it laying around and used it.

Cranberry juice. Lot easier to prepare then adding lipstick to be honest. Nice idea. I guess ketchup can work as well as juice would need to be dense not wattered down i guess for good effect.

Distribution wise... I had idea to edit it to some 2 parts of 20 ish minutes each. Depending if we are happy with results we will consider monetizing it. If not we will keep it private. As a thank you for your participation and ideas i will share some parts here.

Reshooting scenes - probably not this time as that kinda looks like work and we would also both love to enjoy this as primary reason why we are doing it then consider other options such is sharing it or selling it even. Maybe down the line we could do double shooting of scenes with or without face covers and see how it turns out. Tough i am aware that face can make or break video for lot of people. Hell im first one who first looks at face of a woman and if that isnt it for me everything else isnt it no matter how good rest of her is or torture scene is.

[letvor]

I'm sorry I wasn't active on the forum while the script was still being written—I would have gladly contributed.

Allow me to offer a few post festum observations:

1)
I enjoyed reading it. The story is rich in detail. The descriptions are vivid, and the plot flows smoothly. The storyline is realistic. I think you should definitely try your hand at writing stories. I’d be happy to read your stories if you decide to share 'em on the forum.

I’d love to read the continuation of the story and find out what happened to the victim’s friends.

2)
I feel that this script is a bit too complex. There are too many elements in the story that would need to be acted out, especially the majority of the blows and parts of the torture scenes.
Please don’t take this as negative criticism. Your effort is commendable, but this is just my opinion and my concern that your film might end up resembling a low-budget PKF studio film.

3)

(...) as did her not perfect belly and some curves that had some more weight then she would like and he loved.

I would suggest you to insert the element of emetophilia and the sentence:
"If you keep going like this, you'll be able to fit into a bikini by summer!"

4)

(...)aside from few illogical things like how can she see a gun with bag over her head (...)

This detail doesn’t pose a problem for me. Even if the girl has a bag over her head, she can still make out the shape of the gun through the material, and if she shouts, “Is that a gun?” the scene will make perfect sense to the viewer and feel natural.

5)
The part with the shoelaces is absolutely fantastic! I read it ten times and still couldn’t stop enjoying it. I love the use of women’s clothing items for tying up, gagging and finally strangulation.

He slowly removed shoelaces from her boot. (...) As he moved shoelace around her neck and started to slowly squeeze she went into frenzy movement, fighting like wounded animal trying to free her hands and legs squeezing him to the best orgasm of his life. Just as her movement slowed down he pulled and spilled huge load over her pussy tits and belly with his orgasm passing in sync with her movement stopping.

6)
My suggestion for future scenes you might film:

If you haven’t already, seek inspiration from the work of Dennis Rader. His crimes were simple yet perfectly efficient. The way he entered homes. The way he spoke to women. The way he calmed them. The way he loved them. And finally... the way he... ... Pure perfection.

All in all, I wish you and your partner lots of luck and success in your future work.

[yyy02]

Hmmm interesting ideas. Will consider quite few of them.

... maybe a cable for single whip as it adds to realism as a instrument i found it laying around and used it. (see 1)

Cranberry juice. Lot easier to prepare then adding lipstick to be honest. Nice idea. I guess ketchup can work as well as juice would need to be dense not wattered down i guess for good effect. (see 2)

(1) But how flexible/rigid is the cable that you plan to use?
Meaning that the more flexible the cable is (within reason), the greater arm swing you could use without hurting your partner while increasing the "bang factor"? Think ZFX?
And Alex (Cruel World) adds makeup of some sort to his singletail to simulate welts.

(2) Blood trickles would be great if you could somehow add them?
I think fake blood is as close as your closest Special FX store?
But that would also add to the complexity/time needed to shoot the scene...and perhaps take you and the wife "out of the moment"... maybe more work than it's worth?

Just some thoughts.

I also like the hair pulling thing.

[Hey You]

I'm sorry I wasn't active on the forum while the script was still being written—I would have gladly contributed.

Allow me to offer a few post festum observations:

1)
I enjoyed reading it. The story is rich in detail. The descriptions are vivid, and the plot flows smoothly. The storyline is realistic. I think you should definitely try your hand at writing stories. I’d be happy to read your stories if you decide to share 'em on the forum.

I’d love to read the continuation of the story and find out what happened to the victim’s friends.

2)
I feel that this script is a bit too complex. There are too many elements in the story that would need to be acted out, especially the majority of the blows and parts of the torture scenes.
Please don’t take this as negative criticism. Your effort is commendable, but this is just my opinion and my concern that your film might end up resembling a low-budget PKF studio film.

3)

(...) as did her not perfect belly and some curves that had some more weight then she would like and he loved.

I would suggest you to insert the element of emetophilia and the sentence:
"If you keep going like this, you'll be able to fit into a bikini by summer!"

4)

(...)aside from few illogical things like how can she see a gun with bag over her head (...)

This detail doesn’t pose a problem for me. Even if the girl has a bag over her head, she can still make out the shape of the gun through the material, and if she shouts, “Is that a gun?” the scene will make perfect sense to the viewer and feel natural.

5)
The part with the shoelaces is absolutely fantastic! I read it ten times and still couldn’t stop enjoying it. I love the use of women’s clothing items for tying up, gagging and finally strangulation.

He slowly removed shoelaces from her boot. (...) As he moved shoelace around her neck and started to slowly squeeze she went into frenzy movement, fighting like wounded animal trying to free her hands and legs squeezing him to the best orgasm of his life. Just as her movement slowed down he pulled and spilled huge load over her pussy tits and belly with his orgasm passing in sync with her movement stopping.

6)
My suggestion for future scenes you might film:

If you haven’t already, seek inspiration from the work of Dennis Rader. His crimes were simple yet perfectly efficient. The way he entered homes. The way he spoke to women. The way he calmed them. The way he loved them. And finally... the way he... ... Pure perfection.

All in all, I wish you and your partner lots of luck and success in your future work.

Thank you for the compliments for the story telling. I didnt go into that earlier becouse english isnt my primary language its croatian so i was worried if i can pass my imagination on to text with any decency. But i read loads of stories and had loads of scenarios in mind that would make great story just never gave it a proper go. Might change that in future as today with ai you have tools to correct language issues.

For number 2 ie scenario. I will not over do it for sure. You wont see 15 kicks with baseball bat here and woman still doing fine. Ill go with realistic as possible stuff. If a man fist kicks a woman in stomach and kidney and leg kicks her in pussy that is it she is down on the floor begging or out cold. Also i will simplify it for my wife so she dont get lost in that much details. What she will know is 4 questions i will ask and answers to those that will act as safewords as well. And some smaller details as when to strugle when to faint and when to expect certain torture method. I also dont plan to go easy on her. Hence she might spill safeword after just few lashes or kick or two.

For me that adds to realism that im trying to get.

Shoelaces part is suggestion from other member of the forum. Ganameade if im not mistaken that i loved a lot and incorporated it on my own way.

As for future well who knows what future holds. Hell maybe we wont be up for this one this weekend. It might turn out romantic weekend with no kink. I might make continuation of a story of her friend.

Also thatnks for the tip about Rader dude. Dont think i read anything about his dirty deeds. Will look into it.

[yyy02]

BTW, here is Alex' email: liu07 mail.ru

Maybe you could email him for thoughts/suggestions.
Although the Cruel World implement inventory is pretty expansive.

[letvor]

The fact that English is not your native language shouldn't discourage you from writing stories. I believe you would do excellently in that field, and you have my full support. I agree that AI can somewhat assist with writing, but there are certain limitations, especially when it comes to explicit content. Even if your English isn't perfect, we're all colleagues on this forum, and no one will hold that against you.
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Shoelaces part is suggestion from other member of the forum. Ganameade if im not mistaken that i loved a lot and incorporated it on my own way.

Ganameade truly has refined taste. I should have guessed it was his handiwork. His stories are excellent, and I suggest you to follow his page (Athletic GIMPs).

I might make continuation of a story of her friend.

I’ll take the liberty of interpreting this as a promise that you'll expand the script into a story.

I suggest you begin your journey through the fantastic world of Dennis Rader here (link):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvWOje46Xp8

[Hey You]

So the weekend ended.

It was not something that went along with carefully laid plans as most things in life usualy arent.

My wife got nasty cold and cough which lead us to ditch scenario we discussed this time around.

What we ended up with was some vanila whipping and sex.

Other then that venue was amazing and if there is interest here i will provide few pictures.

Let me know.

Scenario is not dead just postponed till better time. Hopefully soon.

[Kelderek]

Sorry to hear that it didn't work out as planned, I hope your wife is well and recovering from the cold!

Let's hope you can realize the scenario at a later time, it's just too good to abandon.
If you want our help with finetuning the script and/or adding some more tortures and cruelty to it, we're here to help!

[yyy02]

So the weekend ended.

It was not something that went along with carefully laid plans as most things in life usualy arent.

My wife got nasty cold and cough which lead us to ditch scenario we discussed this time around.

What we ended up with was some vanila whipping and sex.

Other then that venue was amazing and if there is interest here i will provide few pictures. ...

At least you had some fun and it just whets the appetite for more in the future, right?