Customs chatter (all producers)

[bdb11112003]

It's been awhile since chatter has been in here, so I figured I post my 8th Custom Script that Lora Cross will be doing beginning of August, will definitely let this chat know when it comes out.

It includes two different AOH Suspension Angles (feet off ground), Inverted torture, backbend stretch torture, and some additional setup scenes. Lora is very easy to work with and can pretty much handle any position you throw at her. She did mention that she would like to increase her Damsel in distress videos. She also has very good prices! So send her your scripts and pick it this up when it comes out!!!!


Title- Agent A: Captured, Tormented, and Broken
Length- Approx 20 minutes

Villains: Two- sex doesn't matter. Will be in full black clothing, long pants and sleeves and fully masked the entire time.

Agent A: Costume: Low cut short, spandex shorts, over a G-string, low, below hip bones. White sports bra, cropped sweatshirt mid abs (preferred)/shirt

Captured:
Scene 1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Opening Script: "Agent A has been working undercover for years trying to break into a sex trafficking organization. Unknown to her, her cover has been exposed to the criminal organization."

Agent A is returning home from a workout wearing earbuds. As she enters the room she does not see two masked people follow her and shock her with a taser in her back. She spasms falling to the floor. The two masked people jump on her holding her to the ground, and continue to shock her until she passes out. The two intruders sit on top of her, one over her thighs, the other over her arms with her hands above her head exposing her bare stomach some more, as they sit on her they punch her in the stomach. After they realize she is not responding, they shock her a few more times to make sure she is out cold, she spasms uncontrollably in her passed out state while they shock her. Once they are confident she is out cold, they put a ball gag in her mouth, and blindfold her. Then put a cloth bag over her head to completely leave her in the dark. They pick her up and carry her out of the scene.

Tormented:
Scene1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, still with the bag over her head, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs tied behind her back and feet bound together with leather cuffs. They attached a hook to the ankle restraints, and removed the hood. They then raise her up into the hair hanging lifeless from her ankles as her head is just a few inches above the floor. They shock her a few times, waking her up leaving her to scream into her ball gag. They punch her bare abs, as the loose crop top has fallen down to her shoulder and exposed her sports bra. The continue to shock and punch her bare midsection for about 20-30 seconds as the scene fades out during the torture....

Scene 2- (2 to 4 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs in front of her and feet bound together. She still is wearing the same outfit from the first scenes. The captures enter the room and shock her with the taser to wake her up, she compulses a few times and then slowly moans and rolls over onto her back guarding her stomach. One of the masked villains then grabs her hands and attaches them to a hook. Her arms are then cranked up pulling her entire body up off the ground, she is pulled up with her arms overhead until her toes can barely touch the ground. She has to keep her legs completely under her body to keep in contact with the floor. She dangles from the hook, the short sweatshirt rides up her ribcage exposing her taut stomach.

They shock her bare abs a few times. Then take off the blindfold, and pull her sweatshirt up over her head exposing her sports bra, and secure her shirt behind her head and her arms so it doesn't fall back down. They take the opportunity to punch her stretched out abs a few times. Agent A raises her legs a few times but cannot keep them up for long, too exhausted from the long beatings. They continue to shock her as the scene fades out.

Cutaway Scene Addition (20-30 seconds):
Between scene 2 and 3, Lora lies on the floor in just her sports bra and G-string, sweaty, wet and dirty from the torture. We hear a guard enter and throw her a bowl of food next to her. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at the food, and pushes it away. This pisses the guard off and proceeds to shock her. He shocks her a few times as the scene fades out.

Scene 3- (4 to 5 minutes)
The scene fades back in and Agent A is still hanging from her hands unconscious, now completely off the ground with her ankles still tied together as well, unable to touch the floor. The interrogators walk back and pull down her shorts to her tied ankles, revealing a tiny G-string that barely covers her pussy. The waistband of the G-string is low on her hips. The two comment on her tight exposed body, and now take off the ball gag and begin to ask who she works for and where her organization is. She moans to them to go fuck themselves. They both laugh at her response and then continue to shock and punch her, Agent A no longer has the strength to lift her legs other than when she shakes from the shocks or punches. After a few rounds of torment they then lift her bra over her head exposing her breasts. One of the interrogators tells the other to wait and they have a fun idea. They walk back in with an ice cube, rubs it slowly over her nipples to get her nipples hard, then place nipple clamps on her. They then slowly run the cub down her abs, just above her G-string teasing her panty line and then slide the cube under her panty. She dangles motionless as both of them grope and tease her body, the other villain also takes part in slowly teasing her with ice over her clamped nipples, and down stretched out stomach, they continue to so as she hangs completely limp and exhausted with slight moans as the scene fades out.

Scene 4-
- Suspension scene angled addition (2 to 3 minutes): Before backbend scene
Pulled tight in a 45% angle, Wrists/arms stretched taught, body off the ground with feet barely touching. Lora is just in her G-string. The two villains continue to shock her, and tease her nipple, stretched out torso and abs with ice and the edge of the electro shocker. Lora is too tired to struggle and just takes her punishment. As she is shocked, her body flips over, exposing her backside. They proceed to whip her back and ass as the scene fades out.
(Attached photo of the bondage position below if you can do it?)

Scene 5- (4 to 5 minutes). I attached a few photos for the back bend, its my favorite, mostly neither hands nor feet able to touch ground, tied and pulled as taut as can be. Let me know what you think about this. Or maybe even something like you oiled abs workout, but tied all the way pulled tight down in a backbend.

Agent A is now completely stripped naked, tied in a stretched backbend position (see attached images for examples) with hands still tied together but now legs slightly apart, and blindfolded again. The sadistic villains that are obsessed with ice return to the scene and slowly torments the Agent's taut belly, breasts, nipples and area right above her pussy for about a minute with the ice cubes. The Agent just lay motionless half conscious from the days of torment. One of the villains then says she has a good idea and fetches a vibrator. She then begins to vibrate Agent A's pussy and clit. Agent A can just lay and take it as her body shivers and impulses from the sexual torment. The other villain continues to slowly torment her with ice over her breast and taut abs as she is vibrated. The continue to torture her as the scene fades out...

[MAV]

It's been awhile since chatter has been in here, so I figured I post my 8th Custom Script that Lora Cross will be doing beginning of August, will definitely let this chat know when it comes out.

It includes two different AOH Suspension Angles (feet off ground), Inverted torture, backbend stretch torture, and some additional setup scenes. Lora is very easy to work with and can pretty much handle any position you throw at her. She did mention that she would like to increase her Damsel in distress videos. She also has very good prices! So send her your scripts and pick it this up when it comes out!!!!


Title- Agent A: Captured, Tormented, and Broken
Length- Approx 20 minutes

Villains: Two- sex doesn't matter. Will be in full black clothing, long pants and sleeves and fully masked the entire time.

Agent A: Costume: Low cut short, spandex shorts, over a G-string, low, below hip bones. White sports bra, cropped sweatshirt mid abs (preferred)/shirt

Captured:
Scene 1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Opening Script: "Agent A has been working undercover for years trying to break into a sex trafficking organization. Unknown to her, her cover has been exposed to the criminal organization."

Agent A is returning home from a workout wearing earbuds. As she enters the room she does not see two masked people follow her and shock her with a taser in her back. She spasms falling to the floor. The two masked people jump on her holding her to the ground, and continue to shock her until she passes out. The two intruders sit on top of her, one over her thighs, the other over her arms with her hands above her head exposing her bare stomach some more, as they sit on her they punch her in the stomach. After they realize she is not responding, they shock her a few more times to make sure she is out cold, she spasms uncontrollably in her passed out state while they shock her. Once they are confident she is out cold, they put a ball gag in her mouth, and blindfold her. Then put a cloth bag over her head to completely leave her in the dark. They pick her up and carry her out of the scene.

Tormented:
Scene1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, still with the bag over her head, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs tied behind her back and feet bound together with leather cuffs. They attached a hook to the ankle restraints, and removed the hood. They then raise her up into the hair hanging lifeless from her ankles as her head is just a few inches above the floor. They shock her a few times, waking her up leaving her to scream into her ball gag. They punch her bare abs, as the loose crop top has fallen down to her shoulder and exposed her sports bra. The continue to shock and punch her bare midsection for about 20-30 seconds as the scene fades out during the torture....

Scene 2- (2 to 4 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs in front of her and feet bound together. She still is wearing the same outfit from the first scenes. The captures enter the room and shock her with the taser to wake her up, she compulses a few times and then slowly moans and rolls over onto her back guarding her stomach. One of the masked villains then grabs her hands and attaches them to a hook. Her arms are then cranked up pulling her entire body up off the ground, she is pulled up with her arms overhead until her toes can barely touch the ground. She has to keep her legs completely under her body to keep in contact with the floor. She dangles from the hook, the short sweatshirt rides up her ribcage exposing her taut stomach.

They shock her bare abs a few times. Then take off the blindfold, and pull her sweatshirt up over her head exposing her sports bra, and secure her shirt behind her head and her arms so it doesn't fall back down. They take the opportunity to punch her stretched out abs a few times. Agent A raises her legs a few times but cannot keep them up for long, too exhausted from the long beatings. They continue to shock her as the scene fades out.

Cutaway Scene Addition (20-30 seconds):
Between scene 2 and 3, Lora lies on the floor in just her sports bra and G-string, sweaty, wet and dirty from the torture. We hear a guard enter and throw her a bowl of food next to her. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at the food, and pushes it away. This pisses the guard off and proceeds to shock her. He shocks her a few times as the scene fades out.

Scene 3- (4 to 5 minutes)
The scene fades back in and Agent A is still hanging from her hands unconscious, now completely off the ground with her ankles still tied together as well, unable to touch the floor. The interrogators walk back and pull down her shorts to her tied ankles, revealing a tiny G-string that barely covers her pussy. The waistband of the G-string is low on her hips. The two comment on her tight exposed body, and now take off the ball gag and begin to ask who she works for and where her organization is. She moans to them to go fuck themselves. They both laugh at her response and then continue to shock and punch her, Agent A no longer has the strength to lift her legs other than when she shakes from the shocks or punches. After a few rounds of torment they then lift her bra over her head exposing her breasts. One of the interrogators tells the other to wait and they have a fun idea. They walk back in with an ice cube, rubs it slowly over her nipples to get her nipples hard, then place nipple clamps on her. They then slowly run the cub down her abs, just above her G-string teasing her panty line and then slide the cube under her panty. She dangles motionless as both of them grope and tease her body, the other villain also takes part in slowly teasing her with ice over her clamped nipples, and down stretched out stomach, they continue to so as she hangs completely limp and exhausted with slight moans as the scene fades out.

Scene 4-
- Suspension scene angled addition (2 to 3 minutes): Before backbend scene
Pulled tight in a 45% angle, Wrists/arms stretched taught, body off the ground with feet barely touching. Lora is just in her G-string. The two villains continue to shock her, and tease her nipple, stretched out torso and abs with ice and the edge of the electro shocker. Lora is too tired to struggle and just takes her punishment. As she is shocked, her body flips over, exposing her backside. They proceed to whip her back and ass as the scene fades out.
(Attached photo of the bondage position below if you can do it?)

Scene 5- (4 to 5 minutes). I attached a few photos for the back bend, its my favorite, mostly neither hands nor feet able to touch ground, tied and pulled as taut as can be. Let me know what you think about this. Or maybe even something like you oiled abs workout, but tied all the way pulled tight down in a backbend.

Agent A is now completely stripped naked, tied in a stretched backbend position (see attached images for examples) with hands still tied together but now legs slightly apart, and blindfolded again. The sadistic villains that are obsessed with ice return to the scene and slowly torments the Agent's taut belly, breasts, nipples and area right above her pussy for about a minute with the ice cubes. The Agent just lay motionless half conscious from the days of torment. One of the villains then says she has a good idea and fetches a vibrator. She then begins to vibrate Agent A's pussy and clit. Agent A can just lay and take it as her body shivers and impulses from the sexual torment. The other villain continues to slowly torment her with ice over her breast and taut abs as she is vibrated. The continue to torture her as the scene fades out...

sounds great bdb, cant wait to see it! Lora Cross has such a t0rturable+ body

[bdb11112003]

I love reading the scripts, Im sure there are a lot of fans out there too, and I consider myself a terrible writer. Would love to see what other folks send in a scripts!!!

[hornythumb]

It's been awhile since chatter has been in here, so I figured I post my 8th Custom Script that Lora Cross will be doing beginning of August, will definitely let this chat know when it comes out.

It includes two different AOH Suspension Angles (feet off ground), Inverted torture, backbend stretch torture, and some additional setup scenes. Lora is very easy to work with and can pretty much handle any position you throw at her. She did mention that she would like to increase her Damsel in distress videos. She also has very good prices! So send her your scripts and pick it this up when it comes out!!!!


Title- Agent A: Captured, Tormented, and Broken
Length- Approx 20 minutes

Villains: Two- sex doesn't matter. Will be in full black clothing, long pants and sleeves and fully masked the entire time.

Agent A: Costume: Low cut short, spandex shorts, over a G-string, low, below hip bones. White sports bra, cropped sweatshirt mid abs (preferred)/shirt

Captured:
Scene 1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Opening Script: "Agent A has been working undercover for years trying to break into a sex trafficking organization. Unknown to her, her cover has been exposed to the criminal organization."

Agent A is returning home from a workout wearing earbuds. As she enters the room she does not see two masked people follow her and shock her with a taser in her back. She spasms falling to the floor. The two masked people jump on her holding her to the ground, and continue to shock her until she passes out. The two intruders sit on top of her, one over her thighs, the other over her arms with her hands above her head exposing her bare stomach some more, as they sit on her they punch her in the stomach. After they realize she is not responding, they shock her a few more times to make sure she is out cold, she spasms uncontrollably in her passed out state while they shock her. Once they are confident she is out cold, they put a ball gag in her mouth, and blindfold her. Then put a cloth bag over her head to completely leave her in the dark. They pick her up and carry her out of the scene.

Tormented:
Scene1- (1 to 2 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, still with the bag over her head, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs tied behind her back and feet bound together with leather cuffs. They attached a hook to the ankle restraints, and removed the hood. They then raise her up into the hair hanging lifeless from her ankles as her head is just a few inches above the floor. They shock her a few times, waking her up leaving her to scream into her ball gag. They punch her bare abs, as the loose crop top has fallen down to her shoulder and exposed her sports bra. The continue to shock and punch her bare midsection for about 20-30 seconds as the scene fades out during the torture....

Scene 2- (2 to 4 minutes)
Agent A is now laying on her side on a hard concrete floor, but now with her hands tied in leather cuffs in front of her and feet bound together. She still is wearing the same outfit from the first scenes. The captures enter the room and shock her with the taser to wake her up, she compulses a few times and then slowly moans and rolls over onto her back guarding her stomach. One of the masked villains then grabs her hands and attaches them to a hook. Her arms are then cranked up pulling her entire body up off the ground, she is pulled up with her arms overhead until her toes can barely touch the ground. She has to keep her legs completely under her body to keep in contact with the floor. She dangles from the hook, the short sweatshirt rides up her ribcage exposing her taut stomach.

They shock her bare abs a few times. Then take off the blindfold, and pull her sweatshirt up over her head exposing her sports bra, and secure her shirt behind her head and her arms so it doesn't fall back down. They take the opportunity to punch her stretched out abs a few times. Agent A raises her legs a few times but cannot keep them up for long, too exhausted from the long beatings. They continue to shock her as the scene fades out.

Cutaway Scene Addition (20-30 seconds):
Between scene 2 and 3, Lora lies on the floor in just her sports bra and G-string, sweaty, wet and dirty from the torture. We hear a guard enter and throw her a bowl of food next to her. She slowly opens her eyes and looks at the food, and pushes it away. This pisses the guard off and proceeds to shock her. He shocks her a few times as the scene fades out.

Scene 3- (4 to 5 minutes)
The scene fades back in and Agent A is still hanging from her hands unconscious, now completely off the ground with her ankles still tied together as well, unable to touch the floor. The interrogators walk back and pull down her shorts to her tied ankles, revealing a tiny G-string that barely covers her pussy. The waistband of the G-string is low on her hips. The two comment on her tight exposed body, and now take off the ball gag and begin to ask who she works for and where her organization is. She moans to them to go fuck themselves. They both laugh at her response and then continue to shock and punch her, Agent A no longer has the strength to lift her legs other than when she shakes from the shocks or punches. After a few rounds of torment they then lift her bra over her head exposing her breasts. One of the interrogators tells the other to wait and they have a fun idea. They walk back in with an ice cube, rubs it slowly over her nipples to get her nipples hard, then place nipple clamps on her. They then slowly run the cub down her abs, just above her G-string teasing her panty line and then slide the cube under her panty. She dangles motionless as both of them grope and tease her body, the other villain also takes part in slowly teasing her with ice over her clamped nipples, and down stretched out stomach, they continue to so as she hangs completely limp and exhausted with slight moans as the scene fades out.

Scene 4-
- Suspension scene angled addition (2 to 3 minutes): Before backbend scene
Pulled tight in a 45% angle, Wrists/arms stretched taught, body off the ground with feet barely touching. Lora is just in her G-string. The two villains continue to shock her, and tease her nipple, stretched out torso and abs with ice and the edge of the electro shocker. Lora is too tired to struggle and just takes her punishment. As she is shocked, her body flips over, exposing her backside. They proceed to whip her back and ass as the scene fades out.
(Attached photo of the bondage position below if you can do it?)

Scene 5- (4 to 5 minutes). I attached a few photos for the back bend, its my favorite, mostly neither hands nor feet able to touch ground, tied and pulled as taut as can be. Let me know what you think about this. Or maybe even something like you oiled abs workout, but tied all the way pulled tight down in a backbend.

Agent A is now completely stripped naked, tied in a stretched backbend position (see attached images for examples) with hands still tied together but now legs slightly apart, and blindfolded again. The sadistic villains that are obsessed with ice return to the scene and slowly torments the Agent's taut belly, breasts, nipples and area right above her pussy for about a minute with the ice cubes. The Agent just lay motionless half conscious from the days of torment. One of the villains then says she has a good idea and fetches a vibrator. She then begins to vibrate Agent A's pussy and clit. Agent A can just lay and take it as her body shivers and impulses from the sexual torment. The other villain continues to slowly torment her with ice over her breast and taut abs as she is vibrated. The continue to torture her as the scene fades out...

I look forward to seeing it as well. If you can, include the script with the notice so I/we can see how the text gets visually rendered.

[skullchaser]

For me, things don't kick in until Scene 3, when her helplessness is made evident by her inability to protect her modesty. Stripping a GIMP is a total sign of control. Anything before that is just waiting and padding a video length so that the buyers think they're getting 20 minutes of nudity in a 23 minute video. At Scene 3 and after, the movie is very well done.

[bdb11112003]

Thanks Skullchaser, I love this discussion, because I love the build up scenes that are not completely nude as much as the full nude scenes in a lot of DiD videos. I do eventually want it to get full nudity, but most of my customs I include a few scenes of capture/build up. I prefer a small back story and roll play and it adds to the erotica for me. But completely understand how this can be scene as waste of time/money for another.

[hornythumb]

Thanks Skullchaser, I love this discussion, because I love the build up scenes that are not completely nude as much as the full nude scenes in a lot of DiD videos. I do eventually want it to get full nudity, but most of my customs I include a few scenes of capture/build up. I prefer a small back story and roll play and it adds to the erotica for me. But completely understand how this can be scene as waste of time/money for another.

Fully agree as a viewer. It is great to hear producers being attentive to the transition to nudity. It is very important since, as indicated, once nude, the sub loses all control. A really hot device is to have the sub undress herself, immodestly before the villain/dom. Since she knows what is coming she wants to delay, but some whip slaps or cane snaps keep her moving. MP/EP fully utilize this device to full extent, as did Ed Lee in those old Nuwest videos.

The other device of yanking up shirts and pulling down G-strings works quite well too. The point is that transition is a key part of the erotica and should be thoughtfully executed.

[yyy02]

...most of my customs I include a few scenes of capture/build up. I prefer a small back story and roll play and it adds to the erotica for me. But completely understand how this can be scene as waste of time/money for another.

Fully agree as a viewer. It is great to hear producers being attentive to the transition to nudity....The point is that transition is a key part of the erotica and should be thoughtfully executed.

Agree to an extent. Though I usually view stripping at least once, and may revisit it later, those scenarios are not on heavy rotation in my viewing habits. Forced stripping is my bag, I guess, though self-stripping is okay.

But full nudity is always good, and the shoes must come off, too. I guess its just one of my quirks. I think it's a reason that Cruel World videos resonate so well with me, they seem to tick all my requirements.

I enjoy reading others scripts, too, to perhaps better my own.

I do have a question about panties, though. When they're left on, is it just a personal choice of the producer/customer? Or does it address some sort of unspoken "rule" in bdsm videos, especially when it comes to the credit card companies?

[bdb11112003]

I would love it if more people posted there scripts on here, to better mine in the future and to read for enjoyment.

Sometimes I do like a scene where they are left on for a full scene, but then ultimately getting to full nudity. The producers that I am requesting I do not believe it matters to their credit card companies. But I do know they do have to stay away from gas that knocks out women or other forms or knocking them out. I think this kind of stuff can get pulled down on by some companies.

But for the most part it is just what a models limits are. I've requested a few customs that have been turned down by a few models/producers, even asked if they would do it but not for release on their website. Which I understand why they wouldn't trust someone to not post the video somewhere.

I do like Cruel World too, however some of the details are always messed up because of translation, but they are by far producing the best content. Would love if they made a full member site.

[yyy02]

...But I do know they do have to stay away from gas that knocks out women or other forms or knocking them out. I think this kind of stuff can get pulled down on by some companies.

But for the most part it is just what a models limits are. I've requested a few customs that have been turned down by a few models/producers, even asked if they would do it but not for release on their website. Which I understand why they wouldn't trust someone to not post the video somewhere.

I do like Cruel World too, however some of the details are always messed up because of translation, but they are by far producing the best content. Would love if they made a full member site.

That's interesting. There's a Nicheclips site, Limp Girls (IIRC), that "specializes" in unconscious women being undressed and fondled.

I also wonder if that's a recent development because PKF and a number of other producers feature "timestop"/"frozen" videos of women being manipulated/posed/fucked.
But I think you're right, the number of videos that feature gassing/knocking out of women seems to have sharply dropped off over the years, at least on Nicheclips. But the old "chloroform/cloth" still seems a popular idea, or is that past history as well?

I'm growing less fond of the pendulum idea. A couple of ones I grabbed recently talk about blood splatter in the BTS portion of the video, but don't show it. I guess they kept that for the customer.

The extent of my customs is with Cruel World, I usually do basic, short scripts that are not heavy on detail. Am pretty specific about the bondage (type, must be tight) and what I want done to the gimp. I also give basic guidelines for what I prefer in the action. The rest I leave up to "artistic interpretation" and Alex and the girls.

Alex is a enthusiastic collaborator about the projects I script (well he's a salesman, too). His riffing on my scripts I found were right in line with the desired outcome. And his English is excellent, imo.