Good idea. Done. Thanks!
ElitePain - COP RLD - Zazie
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smartass mode on:
Skullchaser, you did not correct the little error, musial2 already pointed out..
but it will mean that another body part will have to bear 35 strokes.
Zazie takes a chance. Better to have 35 somewhere else than the 70 she has drawn. Amanda brings in the deck of cards for Zazie to draw. Zazie reaches in and selects a card. The card shows…
At the moment of decision whether to draw another card or not Zazie could not be aware that another body part will be involved. It could also turn out to be blindfold, +5 ... or whatever.
(smartass mode off)
Skullchaser, you did not correct the little error, musial2 already pointed out..
but it will mean that another body part will have to bear 35 strokes.
Zazie takes a chance. Better to have 35 somewhere else than the 70 she has drawn. Amanda brings in the deck of cards for Zazie to draw. Zazie reaches in and selects a card. The card shows…
At the moment of decision whether to draw another card or not Zazie could not be aware that another body part will be involved. It could also turn out to be blindfold, +5 ... or whatever.
(smartass mode off)

Re: ElitePain - COP RLD - Zazie
When one tries to win a race for goodies, one can get sloppy.
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Ok, I think I've fixed it. I changed two paragraphs.
Zazie blanches at the thought. 70! 70 blows to her thighs. She knows what it means and how it will feel. Of course, she can change the card and add 10 more strokes to the 25 she already has, and hope for the best on the next draw, but will have to bear 35 strokes.
Zazie takes a chance. Better to have 35 and a little bit of hope than the 70 she has drawn. Amanda brings in the deck of cards for Zazie to draw. Zazie reaches in and selects a card. The card shows…
Zazie blanches at the thought. 70! 70 blows to her thighs. She knows what it means and how it will feel. Of course, she can change the card and add 10 more strokes to the 25 she already has, and hope for the best on the next draw, but will have to bear 35 strokes.
Zazie takes a chance. Better to have 35 and a little bit of hope than the 70 she has drawn. Amanda brings in the deck of cards for Zazie to draw. Zazie reaches in and selects a card. The card shows…
Re: ElitePain - COP RLD - Zazie
@pedro, what is the long red vertical line on the middle of the back of easter egg girl ? It looks like a blood line, but it's too big and linear. A tatoo ?
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Tattoo
Slava Ukraini - אני עומד עם ישראל (not politics, just humanity!)


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Well, I was sure I have seen this kind of tattoo here on elitepain.. Not same girl, she is a newbie, but very similar tattoo style. I think I have found her: Nicole (The Experiment, Dr. Lomp Court Case 9)





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When will the movie from the easter egg be released??
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