Yvonne in trouble (10 parts - ideas and feedback appreciated)

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Part 1: A disgusting patient

Yvonne, a 26-year-old woman, has just returned to her homeland, a small Caribbean country, after studying medicine for 8 years in Berlin. Both her parents are of German origin and reside in the small country. Yvonne is completing her residency as a diabetologist at the country's central hospital, which has been under a harsh dictatorship for the past six months. Yvonne is a leftist and a humanitarian. She is a blonde beauty with a moderate build and perhaps a fragile body. Yvonne finds it difficult to cope with the political situation in her country, as she strongly disagrees with the dictatorship's policies and the violation of human rights. She feels a sense of frustration and helplessness as she witnesses the suffering of her fellow citizens and the deterioration of the country's healthcare system under the oppressive regime. Despite her internal struggles, Yvonne remains determined to fulfill her duty as a doctor and help those in need, even if it means putting herself in danger. Yvonne is also deeply affected by the fate of her former classmates, a boy and a girl who have been arrested and detained under suspicious circumstances. She fears for their safety and well-being, as there have been reports of torture and mistreatment of political prisoners in the country's jails. Yvonne feels a sense of guilt and regret for not being able to do more to help them, as she is caught in a delicate situation as a doctor under the regime's control.


Yvonne's heart races as she sees the notorious torturer Ramirez being wheeled into the hospital on a stretcher. The man, 59 y.o. known for his brutal methods of interrogation and torture, overweighted, had reportedly suffered a diabetic episode and was now in need of urgent medical attention. Yvonne feels conflicted as she takes in the sight of the man, whom she knows has caused immeasurable suffering to countless individuals in the country. She wonders if she should refuse to treat him, but as a doctor, she knows she must provide medical care to all patients, regardless of their past actions or affiliations.

Yvonne grits her teeth as she approaches the man's bedside, trying to maintain her composure as she checks his vitals and administers insulin to regulate his blood sugar levels. The torturer's presence in the hospital unnerves her, and she can't help but feel a sense of disgust and anger towards him. However, Yvonne knows that she must remain professional and uphold her oath as a doctor. She continues to provide care to the torturer, but makes sure to do so without showing any signs of empathy or compassion. She tells herself that she is simply doing her job and fulfilling her duty as a healthcare professional. As she tends to the torturer, Yvonne can't help but think about the fate of her former classmates who have been detained under the regime's control. She wonders if the torturer had a hand in their arrest and torture, and if there is anything she can do to help them.

Yvonne feels a sense of helplessness and frustration wash over her once again, as she realizes that she is caught in a difficult position. She wants to speak out against the regime's human rights violations, but she also knows that doing so could put her own safety and the safety of her family at risk. For now, Yvonne focuses on providing the best possible care to all her patients, including the torturer. She hopes that one day, the political situation in her country will improve, and that she will be able to speak out against the injustices she has witnessed without fear of reprisal.


As the doctor continues to treat the torturer, he starts to show a particular interest in her. He makes sexist comments about her appearance and stares at her persistently all over her body. When she tries to ignore him or change the subject, he persists in asking her if she sympathizes with the regime.


[ Even in the hospital bed, he was still fantasizing about Yvonne. In the simplest scenario created, the girl broke during the cruel interrogations and now surrenders to his desires without resisting anymore.]

The doctor feels uncomfortable and intimidated by the torturer's behavior. She tries to remain professional and focused on his medical needs, but she cannot ignore the inappropriate and harassing behavior. She knows that she needs to establish boundaries, but she also worries about the consequences of speaking up.

Despite her reservations, the doctor eventually decides to confront the torturer about his behavior. She explains that his comments and behavior are inappropriate and that they need to stop. The torturer initially tries to brush off her concerns, but eventually he apologizes and agrees to treat her with respect. As the torturer's health improves, he continues to receive medical care from the doctor. While the doctor is still wary of him, she appreciates that he has made an effort to change his behavior. She hopes that he will continue to recognize the importance of treating others with respect and dignity, regardless of their gender or beliefs.

As he approaches full recovery, the torturer's behavior once again changes, as he starts making vulgar comments and leering at the girl, with a suggestive look all over her body. The torturer looks at Yvonne with a mix of surprise and amusement. "What's the matter, doctor? Can't a man appreciate a beautiful woman when he sees one? Oh, I know you one of those leftist feminists who think they can tell men what to do" he says with a sneer.

"My political beliefs or my gender have nothing to do with this. Your behavior is unacceptable, and I will not tolerate it" she says, emphasizing each word.

The torturer's expression changes to one of anger and hostility. "You think you can talk to me like that? Do you know who I am? I could make your life a living hell. Even worse, I can I can make you crawl” he says menacingly.

Oscar Ramirez glares at Yvonne for a few more seconds before turning his head away in silence. Yvonne continues to treat him, but the atmosphere in the room is tense and uncomfortable. She feels relieved when the treatment is over, and the torturer is wheeled away from the hospital.

After being discharged from the hospital he says to her, "Do you have a boyfriend? I wonder how he fucks you. I'd cum before I even entered you, you're freaking beautiful."



[ Just a few months ago, Yvonne had happy moments with casual partners while she was a student in Germany. Now, back in her homeland, she will soon regret the day she was born, arrested and helpless in the disgusting hands of Oscar Ramirez, who is obsessed with tiny girls, especially with blondes and redheads. He is twice Yvonne's age and said to another interrogator while he fondled her before an evening torture session "it's the most perfect skin I ever touched" ]

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Part 2: Prelude to Hell

Ramirez left the hospital with his discharge papers at one o'clock in the afternoon, while Yvonne's shift ended at six in the evening. The Caribbean island was small, with only five cities, and Yvonne worked in the capital, Santa Catarina, which had a population of 80,000 and relatively short distances. As usual, the young doctor walked alone to her house, but this time she was deeply immersed in very worrying thoughts.

One block before she reached her apartment, three police officers who were smoking in front of their parked jeep and eating sandwiches started making very vulgar comments to her as soon as they saw Yvonne. She was very beautiful and also looked like a northern European tourist. She was used to such public harassment in her own country, but since the coup six months ago (which coincidentally was the same day that Yvonne was returning permanently from Berlin), those who had increased verbal attacks on passing women to an incredible degree and with greater coarseness than usual were the security forces men patrolling the street. They felt like they were the state. It had happened to her many times recently, but now she felt that the police officers were more uncontrollable. She connected it to Ramirez, perhaps he was plotting something against her and had already given information and had already given fabricated information to the police and to the army.

She quickened her pace and finally reached her apartment building. As she entered her apartment and locked the door behind her, Yvonne realized that she needed to be more cautious from now on. She made a mental note to never walk alone after dark and to always stay alert. Danger could be lurking around every corner.

The young doctor remained frightened, but she didn't want to go to her parents who lived 10 minutes away from her apartment to avoid worrying them. She called a colleague with whom she had a close relationship at work, to have a drink at her house, simply telling him on the phone that she wanted to discuss hospital administration and salaries. The truth was she wanted to confess what had happened with Oscar Ramirez during his hospital stay. Jesus, a young pathologist, arrived half an hour later.

She welcomed him inside and poured them both a drink. Yvonne took a deep breath and began to recount the events of Oscar's hospital stay, how he had made her feel uncomfortable with his persistent attention, and how he had stared at her with drool running down his mouth due to sexual desire.


“Yvonne, didn't they tell you who he is?”
“ I knew from the first moment, an incredible scumbag, a torturer of the junta.”
“He's not just a torturer, Yvonne, he's a sick sadist, especially with girls who are arrested for political reasons. He's nicknamed "the sadistic beast" because of his weight.”
“I imagined that, unfortunately”
“You don't know anything it seems. Be very careful now that he has his eye on you. Until the junta he was just a police officer close to retirement and in the days of democracy, the most he would do was to hit a girl who stole from a supermarket. It was impossible for him to systematically apply torture, but now he has become infamous and takes women, also men but very rarely, usually only to torture their wives and girlfriends in front of them. This way the women feel even more vulnerable. A monster”
“ Wow, I knew he was a cruel torturer, nothing else. I didn't know he was so inventive with his methods."


[ In his career as a police officer during the years of democracy, Ramirez couldn't systematically torture someone, but if he came across a beautiful woman, he would push the limits of indecency, and of course, he would also use physical violence (beatings, face slaps etc) but not enough to be charged. Fifteen years ago, a moment where he interrogates an Argentine tourist who was found with a very small amount of cannabis in her luggage. The tourist was detained for 2 days without being charged, but Ramirez did a lot to her (e.g. rape threats and moderate punches to her belly). He remembered her for years and sighed in his bed while playing with his genitals.]

"Resign from the hospital and leave the country quickly. Since he has shown such interest in you, I believe he will fabricate false charges against you in order to interrogate you. Leave before he does so."
"Should I go back to Germany?"
"Yes, and tomorrow morning if possible. Now, in the junta, they have the right to interrogate you for another 60 days, even if they don't formally charge you with subversive activity. You understand that if something like that happens, they will break you in the torture chambers."

She became increasingly worried about what he might do to her. She began to sob and tremble. She seemed to be having a panic attack. It was practically impossible for her to leave in a few hours, she needed more time. Her pretty, pale face had reddened from the crying and the threat she felt.


[ Yvonne then gets up from the chair and continues crying on the couch. It is very likely that she won't be able to escape the country and will be captured by Ramírez's men. She is delicate and has never been able to handle even regular pain from minor injuries, so it's hard to imagine how she'll cope if she is arrested. She always had a feeling that her beauty could become a curse, but she was unable to predict under which circumstances or when. If she were more ordinary or even ugly, and less intelligent or less gifted, she wouldn't have been targeted by the torturer's sickest desires. ]

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I intentionally included small and intriguing images in the first two parts (e.g. only the first image of part 2 is related to interrogations) because I prefer imagination to dominate in the story.

It doesn't make sense to fill it with pictures since they are abundant everywhere, but even by inserting an unrelated full-sized image as a technical example, it weakens the effort I put into writing.

Therefore, in the next parts, I may not include any pictures at all, even though I had already picked out some, because it seems that the reader's eye is only interested in the convenience that any visual element provides. Anyway, thank you.

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Part 3: The Three Invaders

Yvonne's colleague, Dr. Jesus, didn't try to calm her down. He let her burst into tears on the couch. Finally, she managed to choke out a few words.
"I don't know what to do. I can't stay here, but I can't leave either."
"The country is small, Yvonne. There's no point in hiding in another house. And it would be unwise for you to put the safety of other people at risk or jeopardize your own position, especially since there's no evidence that you were involved in any activity against the junta."

Yvonne nodded, understanding his point. But the realization that there was no way out of the situation hit her hard.
"But if they've already constructed a case against me for arrest, what can I do?"
Dr. Jesus shook his head.
"It's a dead end. If they've built a case against you, it's impossible for you to leave the country."

Dr. Jesus stood up and walked over to her, placing a hand on her shoulder.
"Leave everything and take the first flight in the morning, anywhere. Maybe the authorities haven't signaled yet, but afterwards it will be too late, too late."

Yvonne looked up at him, her eyes wide with fear. "But where will I go? What will I do?"
Dr. Jesus gave her a small, sad smile. "I don't know. But it's better than staying here and waiting for the inevitable."

She stood up, wiped away her tears, and took a deep breath. It was time to leave everything behind and start a new life, somewhere far away from Oscar Ramirez and the junta's reach.

Dr. Jesus gave Yvonne some practical tips for leaving the country, such as using public transportation instead of a taxi, using cash instead of credit cards, and staying off the internet. He also gave her the amount of cash she needed. Yvonne was grateful for his help and support, and they hugged before he left her home. Yvonne was grateful for his help and support, and they hugged before he left her home.

Fifteen minutes passed since he left, and then there was a knock on the door. Yvonne knew it was pointless to try to escape, so she opened the door, realizing that the main adventure was about to begin.

Three plainclothes officers entered, Ramirez was one of them, but to her surprise, they were not too hostile. They sat on the couch and prompted her to sit in the chair to discuss and determine some things. It was already 10 pm.

Yvonne's heart raced as she tried to remain calm and composed in front of the officers. She knew that any wrong move or word could lead to her arrest and torture. She took a deep breath and sat down in the chair, keeping her eyes downcast.

"Give us your cell phones and shut down the computer”.
She handed them over to Ramirez, trembling. He said to her
"Smart and beautiful girl. If you weren't an ideological vegetarian and made us a hamburger because we are hungry, if there was meat in the fridge, you would be perfect."

Yvonne sat down again.

Ramirez spoke first, "Dr. Yvonne, we are here to discuss your recent activities at the hospital. We have reason to believe that you have been involved in subversive activity against the government."

Yvonne tried to keep her voice steady as she replied, "I assure you, I have not been involved in any subversive activity. I am simply a doctor trying to do my job and help people."

Ramirez leaned forward, his voice low and menacing, "We have evidence to the contrary. We have witnesses who have seen you associating with known anti-government activists and attending secret meetings."

She knew that they were lying and had fabricated the evidence against her. She had to think quickly and find a way to escape.

"I don't know what you're talking about," she said firmly.

The officers exchanged a glance, and Ramirez leaned back in his seat, studying her closely. Yvonne felt his eyes on her with special interest and tried to keep her composure.

The second officer, around 40 years old, a man with a mustache and very dark skin, also looked at her persistently, focusing on her chest.
"I see your beautiful small breasts shaking, why is that?" he said.

The third officer, a little younger, around 35, stood up and looked at the girl's books on the shelf.
"I see a lot of anarchist and communist books, both theoretical and literary," he said. “You are a leftish bitch”.

"I read everything, there are also a lot of medical books, as well as literature without any political agenda, I don't know if you noticed them."

"The girl is very educated" he said to the others. “And quite rebellious, a wannabe guerilla, instead of finding a man to marry”.
“Would you like to go out with me, Yvonne, or am I too much of a cop for your liking?"


The young doctor knew that everything had ended and that she would be officially arrested in a few minutes. Just as an introduction, they were enjoying the game of the unspeakable fear she felt. Her father had recently undergone open-heart surgery, and when he will learn that his beloved daughter is subjected to torture and gang rapes in the police headquarters, he might not be able to handle it.

She thought it was pointless to argue with them anymore and said,
"I am innocent, but I know that this changes nothing for whatever you have decided. You can proceed with whatever you have already decided."

Ramirez said to his 35-year-old colleague,
"Take the phone, has the van arrived?"
He continued:
"Put the handcuffs on her with her hands behind her back."
"No beatings until we arrive at the office, not even during the short drive in the van."
"She can bring only one set of clothes and a toothbrush. "She has such a beautiful smile, and we want her to brush her teeth."
"I want her mouth to remain perfect. "
“Because we won't just have work with this bitch, we will have also parties at night.”


[ Yvonne asked before they took her to let her go to the bathroom. The 40-year-old officer, who Oscar Ramirez used to call Pedro, said to her "okay, just let me check first if there is a way to escape from there." "You can go for fifteen minutes, I'll do you the favor of being alone and taking a shower, we won't come in with you, you see what gentle people we are?" The young doctor closed the door, got into the bathtub and cried bitterly. She didn't believe in the existence of God, but at that moment she began to murmur a prayer she had learned as a child.

Yvonne quickly ended her shower and dressed in a pair of blue jeans, a white t-shirt, and flat sport shoes. She stepped out of the bathroom to find the three cops (Oscar, Basilio and Pedro) waiting for her, as expected. They brutally grabbed her arms, and Pedro tried to kick her from behind while shouting "A clean little blondie". Oscar Ramirez intervened and yelled at the other two, "No more hits during the transport!" ]

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I made a slight correction to the posted part 3 and it disappeared, "until it has been approved by a moderator".

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I made a slight correction to the posted part 3 and it disappeared, "until it has been approved by a moderator".

I'm really enjoying the story and hope to see it continued. I hpoe that the hassles you're having don't stop you from wanting to continue. If you want to send me a message to share ideas, I'd be more than happy to do so.

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Thanks for the feedback! I will post tomorrow part 4 Feel free to send me ideas in the thread of via pm.

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Part 4: The Welcome

At the exit of the apartment building, the girl shouted, "I am Dr. Yvonne Herzog and I have been arrested." She wanted someone, a neighbor or passerby, to hear her and search for her if she disappeared. The black officer Basilio silenced her mouth with his huge hand. Not even one person opened their window. Maybe some were looking from behind the glass of their apartments, but she didn't have time to see.

With her hands tied behind her back with handcuffs, they put her in the parked police van. There were two other police officers there who did not stop groping her chest above the shirt throughout the journey to the police station.
"The bitch has very small tits," said the first one. "You don't prefer them?” said the second one. "I love everything about her."

At the back of the van, Ramírez was constantly talking on his phone, obviously giving instructions to his men at the police station, but also keeping an eye on the two young policemen in case they beat Yvonne. He had ordered them not to go beyond groping and fondling. The other two who arrested her in the apartment were sitting in front, driver and co-driver.

Passing through the gate of the police station, Yvonne heard exclamations of admiration from the sentry and a bunch of other words. "What a beautiful anarchist she is," "Does she know that she won't come out of here alive and hero? It's either one or the other," "Will you let me have some fun with her too?".

Ramirez led Yvonne to a room on the first floor and closed the door.
"We don't need to verify your details formally, they're already known and I've already recorded them," he said.

"I just want you to see something: She's a young student who was caught by my colleagues roughly at the same time as you in a bar while drinking beer with her boyfriend. She's not involved in any anti-government activities and I know that, but a waiter at the bar who is an informant of us thought she's a good catch and decided to give her to me as a gift. I will think of what to fabricate to make a case against her that legitimizes a 60-day interrogation, then maybe I can let her go."


Ramirez made Yvonne sit on the bench and called the others to bring the girl who was arrested at the bar. She was a beautiful girl around 20, with fair skin and brown hair. She was trembling all over and only said, "I didn't do anything. Please don't torture me."

The girl didn't even see Yvonne, who was handcuffed, she was only begging the police officers. "I have an eye problem with severe myopia, please don't beat me in the face, I might go blind, I will do whatever you say”.


"Oh, I see you have outstanding teeth, babe," said Ramirez. "I have a passion for perfect dental alignment, maybe because my own teeth are decayed from age and smoking." "Open your mouth so I can check if you're hiding anything inside." After this humiliation, Ramirez ordered her to strip. Yvonne was watching in terror and at one point whispered to the unknown girl "They're sick sadists, be brave." It was only then that the girl noticed Yvonne, who was handcuffed to the bench, but the girl didn't make any signal to her.

"I changed my mind," Ramirez said, "you're so scared that you'll take off your clothes by yourself, but I prefer to undress you with my colleagues."
"Now, I have business with the blonde doctor, take the little girl to the cell 8A, with handcuffs, I'll visit her a bit later."


They calmly took the brunette from the room, and Ramirez turned to two muscular military policemen who remained in the area. “Strip the blonde”. Oscar Ramirez was standing at a relative distance, overseeing the situation. "Listen, little girl Yvonne, I know there's really nothing for you to confess, but you will confess to whatever I like. Just for being you”. The other girl you saw, we'll release her after the fun. You will go to court and you will get 15 years, if you're very difficult maybe 40, you will come out when you turn 66 years old". Yvonne knew that the junta would not last forever, but in that moment, with the psychological terror, she believed everything. "You know, my dear, what electroshock is? We'll start with it, it's the ultimate pain." “My old penis becomes iron with you, imagine what will happen with me soon when you'll be begging for some mercy and blame the invention of electricity”.