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[Ed2]

Hi, all. I just finished a story, my first in a year. Its star is Shannon Clarke, a beautiful redhead barmaid found guilty of "criminal enticement" and sentenced to a public whipping. First she had to endure an evening in the hands of the lustful magistrate who set her up, forced through fear of torture to please him sexually. The remaining 75% however is dedicated to the protracted and brutal whipping, with special emphasis on her superb breasts.

https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... clarke.htm

[wulf]

Hi, all. I just finished a story, my first in a year. Its star is Shannon Clarke, a beautiful redhead barmaid found guilty of "criminal enticement" and sentenced to a public whipping. First she had to endure an evening in the hands of the lustful magistrate who set her up, forced through fear of torture to please him sexually. The remaining 75% however is dedicated to the protracted and brutal whipping, with special emphasis on her superb breasts.

https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... clarke.htm

Looking forward to reading it, and thanks for posting this heads up.

[mothbrad]

Excellent story as always, Ed. I enjoyed it a great deal!

[boccaccio]

Hey, Ed

I read the story and really liked just about everything – the historical setting, the public display, the rude onlookers, the multiple villains, each of whom derives great sexual pleasure from the punishment meted out to the heroine, and most importantly, of course, a beautifully described heroine who is bound in a well imagined and provocative position that lent itself well to a thorough flogging of her beautifully presented breasts. One can almost hear the crack of the leather as Robertson's whip bites into her out-thrust mounds. They are indeed such stuff as dreams are made on. Perhaps one day our friend Williej might re-create this position; your description of Shannon Clarke would certainly lend itself well to Willie’s talents.

The characters of the magistrate and Robertson are well fleshed out and, while their inclinations are clearly described, they're done in the third person, which, for me, is much more gratifying than having the villain tell the victim what he's thinking, and what he plans to do. And your deliciously full-breasted heroine suffers admirably as she responds to her most Ed-ucational chastisement.

There’s quite a long lead up before the whipping begins, but the preliminaries held my interest very well, except, perhaps for one or two brief diversions. The actual whipping was very well described, as always in your stories. So much so that I couldn’t help hoping that the villains could come up with a bogus pretext for extending her punishment. But all good things must come to an end, I suppose, and Shannon’s suffering was highly entertaining. That said, she’s definitely a heroine whose further unfortunate adventures would attract this reader.

There were a couple of questionable historical references, but that's a tiny, tiny quibble. I thought the story was, from beginning to end, perhaps your best. The three principal characters all spring to life, Shannon is beautifully described, and the action is both compelling and provocative.

Thanks for another great read.

[sirstef]

I believe I've read all your stories in the GIMP collection and I know i've enjoyed whatever I've read. Looking forward to reading this one.
Do keep up the good work - appreciate it

[Laura]

Yummy! I love your stories and look forward to reading this one which looks more like a novella that just a story. More to savour. I wish I had the talent to write so well. I love historical settings of public whippings of women. I just sometimes wish the women were older and not so beautiful but understand that's what men readars want. Thank you.

[Ed2]

Yummy! I love your stories and look forward to reading this one which looks more like a novella that just a story. More to savour. I wish I had the talent to write so well. I love historical settings of public whippings of women. I just sometimes wish the women were older and not so beautiful but understand that's what men readars want. Thank you.

The funny thing is, when I started, I thought it would be shorter than usual since I really only have one action setting and method with Shannon. Problem is, once I start, I never know exactly what will happen; I just keep chipping away until I think it's over. I also don't write in any linear way, just chunks at a time then filling in the gaps.

As to the victims' appearance, that's what this man wants. That's the nice thing about fantasies.

[yyy02]

Thanks very much Ed!

[gamblers1000]

thanks enjoy stories more the most videos i see the link but i check story section every week no new stories should be easier to find instead of posting link edit i do see where story was posted

[Laura]

Ed2, I read the story last night while in bed. The images are very arousing. You are such a talented writer. Your descriptions are so vivid that I can imagine being in the scene watching. I am certainly glad that I was not Shannon. My god that would hurt!