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Re: The death and demise of sexual Object K
Posted: Thu Jul 18, 2024 5:29 pm
I haven't had a chance to read your story yet, but it looks very interesting. As for Osouk, his stories, along with many other wonderful ones, are still available here:
https://ralphus.net/special/stories/moreauthors/
https://ralphus.net/special/stories/moreauthors/
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Re: The death and demise of sexual Object K
Posted: Mon Jul 22, 2024 9:03 am
A modern torture story in a very special presentation - a short prologue sends the poor victim to hell, but we learn the details below as an autopsy report and conversation between a pathologist, prosecutor and detective...
An interesting idea for a story that was implemented intensively and appealingly
Of course, the pathologist's autopsy report on the dead victim creates distance - but without this distance, the many cruelties described would hardly be bearable so compact in just one story.
There is an interesting twist at the end, the story comes full circle, detective and prosecutor belong to the perpetrators themselves!
Good idea, cleverly implemented... Keep it up!
Rupert
An interesting idea for a story that was implemented intensively and appealingly
Of course, the pathologist's autopsy report on the dead victim creates distance - but without this distance, the many cruelties described would hardly be bearable so compact in just one story.
There is an interesting twist at the end, the story comes full circle, detective and prosecutor belong to the perpetrators themselves!
Good idea, cleverly implemented... Keep it up!
Rupert
Re: The death and demise of sexual Object K
Posted: Fri Jul 26, 2024 1:03 am
I apologise - I didn't get notified of your reply. In any case, I now know what you mean, and remember those stories as well. I checked the wayback machine, and they tantalisingly archived the forum index, but not the actual stories. I guess the only hope is if a member here saved them, but I really don't know.KirstensKutje wrote: ↑Thu Jul 18, 2024 6:39 pm @ mothbrad Ah, you're so sweet! I hope to read your review soon and wish you many pleasures while reading!
I'm so glad you post the link to the stories of Osouk that are still present here, it's so good to keep the database alive and relevant this way!
Unfortunately though, I was very well aware of these stories (I now back-ed them up). But I'm not talking about these stories, but talking about three of the stories that were deleted/crashed/dissappeared/got zapped from the forum, just after the first crash and just before the second one.
Those stories never were saved to that database, but were posted on the forum, just like these messages we are posting right now.
Oh well, as you see: not everything stays on the internetStill, very glad for your reaction, hope to hear from you!
As for your story here, it's a wonderfully extreme examination of cruelly. I love the detail, and the inventiveness of it all, and the incorporation of the daughter is a particularly nasty addition. I will definitely be looking forward to your next pieces of writing!
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