An Illustrated Story: Abused War Captive
Posted: Fri Oct 10, 2025 12:47 am
The nurse adjusted the IV drip with practiced hands, her fingers lingering a second too long on the cold metal valve. Stephanie noticed the hesitation. "She's not eating again," the nurse murmured, avoiding Stephanie's eyes. The clipboard in her arms bore a single sheet—too thin for all the things left unsaid.
Stephanie sat down on the edge of the bed, the plastic mattress cover crinkling under her weight. Her grandmother's hand, loose-skinned and trembling, curled around hers like a vine clinging to stone. "You came," the old woman rasped. The scent of antiseptic couldn't quite mask the sour tang beneath—something organic, something fading. Stephanie swallowed. "Of course I did. I brought your favorite." She held up a paper bag, the grease from the custard buns staining through.
The old woman's nostrils flared, but she didn't reach for it. Instead, she stared at the ceiling where a water stain branched like veins. "Ask me now," she said. The words hung between them, sharp as the IV needle in her arm. Stephanie's throat tightened. She'd rehearsed this moment for years—ever since she'd found the brittle photo tucked in Grand-Aunt Moana's prayer book, the edges nibbled by silverfish. A portrait of women and soldiers, their eyes black pits in the flashbulb glare.
A fly buzzed against the window. The grandmother's fingers tightened suddenly, her nails leaving half-moon indents in Stephanie's palm. "You want to know," she continued, voice cracking like dry earth. "About the camp. About the men." The heart monitor beeped again—slower this time. The grandmother's tongue darted out to lick cracked lips. Stephanie reached for the water cup, her fingers brushing the plastic just as her grandmother grabbed her wrist. The old woman's grip was shockingly strong, the bones grinding together. "Listen," Her pupils dilated, swallowing the faded brown of her irises. Her yellowed teeth clenched before beginning the story that she had kept inside for decades. Stephanie leaned in, catching the scent of her grandmother's breath—old newspapers and the metallic tang of blood thinners.
Stephanie, ever the vigilant upcoming news reporter, clicked on her recorder. The paper bag split open in her lap, custard oozing onto her skirt, unnoticed. The old woman's breath came faster now, shallow panting that fogged her oxygen tube in erratic bursts. She began her tale:
Stephanie sat down on the edge of the bed, the plastic mattress cover crinkling under her weight. Her grandmother's hand, loose-skinned and trembling, curled around hers like a vine clinging to stone. "You came," the old woman rasped. The scent of antiseptic couldn't quite mask the sour tang beneath—something organic, something fading. Stephanie swallowed. "Of course I did. I brought your favorite." She held up a paper bag, the grease from the custard buns staining through.
The old woman's nostrils flared, but she didn't reach for it. Instead, she stared at the ceiling where a water stain branched like veins. "Ask me now," she said. The words hung between them, sharp as the IV needle in her arm. Stephanie's throat tightened. She'd rehearsed this moment for years—ever since she'd found the brittle photo tucked in Grand-Aunt Moana's prayer book, the edges nibbled by silverfish. A portrait of women and soldiers, their eyes black pits in the flashbulb glare.
A fly buzzed against the window. The grandmother's fingers tightened suddenly, her nails leaving half-moon indents in Stephanie's palm. "You want to know," she continued, voice cracking like dry earth. "About the camp. About the men." The heart monitor beeped again—slower this time. The grandmother's tongue darted out to lick cracked lips. Stephanie reached for the water cup, her fingers brushing the plastic just as her grandmother grabbed her wrist. The old woman's grip was shockingly strong, the bones grinding together. "Listen," Her pupils dilated, swallowing the faded brown of her irises. Her yellowed teeth clenched before beginning the story that she had kept inside for decades. Stephanie leaned in, catching the scent of her grandmother's breath—old newspapers and the metallic tang of blood thinners.
Stephanie, ever the vigilant upcoming news reporter, clicked on her recorder. The paper bag split open in her lap, custard oozing onto her skirt, unnoticed. The old woman's breath came faster now, shallow panting that fogged her oxygen tube in erratic bursts. She began her tale: