Story Request?

[Anya_N]

Attention writers!
I have been anxious to find writers to either comission or collaborate with. Lately, I've had this major idea which I think is quite yummy! Anyone interested in taking this on either as a comission or colab just feel free to PM me.

PREMISE:
Near-future right-wing dictatorship somewhere in the world enacts brutal punishments for anything they consider "sexual deviance." Homosexuality is particularly sought after. Those accused of it have only three chances to confess:

Once, before any interrogation has begun. Basically, as soon as a deviant is brought in.
The second, under torture. The deviant may confess at any time.
Third, after a manditory public punishment (details below). If they confess, and ALSO repent, they are given a quick death by hanging. If they confess, but refuse to repent, they are whipped to death on a later date (because the punishment requires 250 lashes with a vicious single-tailed braided whip, it would be too merciful to conduct that execution immediately)

If they do not confess after their publich punishment, they are stretched to death.

The mandatory punishment for homosexuality is 24 hours on a wooden horse, with some additional attributes to make it more painful. If a couple is arrested together, they are punished together, after they have both either confesssed under torture or are declared guilty by the Purifiers. The couple is placed facing each other on the horse. Ropes are tied around their waists. The other end is attached to the other's breasts (in the case of women). The rope is long enough so that w when one of them is raised off of the horse, the one who is raised is able to be raised high enough to stretch the other's breasts high and painfully taut. Their nipples are also clamped, so that electric shocks may be delivered to them regardless of whether they are on the horse or not. When on the horse, they are astride either a peaqr, which can be expanded by remote, or a large metal dildo with ridges and tiny metal studs. The idea is to have the women restrained loosely enough so that when the devices are electrified, or when they are whipped, or both, they are able to writhe, and thus move the horse. Naturally, this would torture the other who is not being shocked or whipped at the time.

For the whipping:
Each is given 50 lashes an hour for a total of 10 hours. This way, they have 14 more hours to suffer the aftermath of the whipping.
10 lashes while stationary on the horse
5 while the whipped victim's nipples are shocked (2 during the shock, 3 in the respite afterward)
5d while the whipped victim's genitals are shocked with the pear/dildo (3 during the shock, 2 in the respite after)
5 while whipped victim's genitals AND nipples are shocked (3 during the shock, 2 in the respite after)
10 while the other woman is raised
The other 15 are as before, just with the other woman still raised

(It goes without saying but I just remembered this little nugget: While the one who is raised has the rope around her waist pulling the one on the horse's breasts up, the fact that the other remains on the horse should cause the rope attached to the raised woman's breasts to be yanked DOWN at the same time. It also goes without saying, but either or both could still writhe due to electric shocks (nipples only in the case of the woman raised) which pulls even more at each other's breasts... personally I think it's delightfully agonizing!))

For the electricity:
No shorter than 30 seconds per shock. Madatory 30 second respite between shocks. Each hour, current is increased by 25%, and the shocks increase in duration by 15 seconds. The longest shocks are 5 minutes. Once that is reached, every shock after is 5 minutes.

Naturally the deviants are given drugs to ensure they don't lose consciousness at all during their punishment.

After the whipping, the public may choose to pay a fee for inflicting electroshocks to one or both of the victims, as well as raise or lower one or both of them.

After the 24 hours of public punishment, their breasts and forehead are branded wih Crosses. A small but ornate one for the fore3head, and large elaborately-designed ones for the breass. Then, in the center of each breast cross, a letter D is branded.

Finally, they are given a chance to confess and repent.

Before their respective executions, they are both fully tortured with the pear, and their breasts are crushed with vices.



There you have it! Anyone interested in writing or collabing this?

[wulf]

Very interesting scenario, and I hope you find someone to take part in writing it. Good luck.

[Darthsaad]

Hi Anya. I could be interested in doing a commission piece. You can check out some of my writing in my Patreon thread and let me know if you think my style works for you.

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[Anya_N]

You ARE talented DS! Just read the first part of what you posted. I see why you charge for your talent, however I'm not able to actually spend money here. I appreciate the praise, and honestly, if it inspires you, you can utilize this if you wish. I don't mind. I'm an aspiring author myself, and understand financially rewarding talent. I regret that I'm not able to do it. Fantastic writing though. I especially love when strong characters are slowly broken under torture. Exquisite!

[Anya_N]

You ARE talented DS! Just read the first part of what you posted. I see why you charge for your talent, however I'm not able to actually spend money here. I appreciate the praise, and honestly, if it inspires you, you can utilize this if you wish. I don't mind. I'm an aspiring author myself, and understand financially rewarding talent. I regret that I'm not able to do it. Fantastic writing though. I especially love when strong characters are slowly broken under torture. Exquisite!

[Anya_N]

Thanks Wolf! I hope so too! I actually have several ideas for various stories. If I find the right partner, I might even combine this idea with a more intense and longer saga involving a rebellion against this regime. Inspired by Kirsten Smart's writing in that aspect.

[wulf]

Thanks Wolf! I hope so too! I actually have several ideas for various stories. If I find the right partner, I might even combine this idea with a more intense and longer saga involving a rebellion against this regime. Inspired by Kirsten Smart's writing in that aspect.

Kirsten is a master (mistress ?) of torture stories, and probably the best inspiration you could have.

[Anya_N]

ITA! I can't WAIT to see her again on the forum! Truthfully, I had pictured male torture in this scenario, as well as female. Kirsten is the only one I know on the forum interested in writing male scenes like that.