Torture in San Rosario
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Carolina L.'s Ordeal
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Carolina L.'s Ordeal
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I think the novel is reaching its final episodes. Surely, the main heroine will be forcibly shaved bald and tortured further, but additional 'gimp appearances' will not be missed. I believe it will conclude around episode 31 or 32.
As I always say, positive comments or criticism, as well as further torture ideas—if they can be applied decently by me in a visual context—are deeply appreciated. I also owe some corrections on a few images.
As I always say, positive comments or criticism, as well as further torture ideas—if they can be applied decently by me in a visual context—are deeply appreciated. I also owe some corrections on a few images.
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As a broad basic idea for further development, I can suggest what the de facto Chilean junta of General Pinochet once used extensively: the collective violence and torture of women and girls in the presence of their fathers, husbands and brothers to force them to testify. From this broad idea, a few isolated episodes could be taken that could create a short novel.
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Carolina L.'s Ordeal
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Thank you so much for the feedback! As you saw, I started working on the topic, weaving it into the main novel. We'll also bring the mom. She's already in the army jeep being transported to headquarters.
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Carolina L.'s Ordeal
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After the introduction, in the next few episodes of the interjected "family" storyline within the main novel "Carolina L.'s Ordeal", there won’t be as many tormentors as in Carolina’s case. There will be only one—the father—who will savagely torture his wife and daughter, either separately or together, through various brutal methods, because they told him, "If you don’t do it, we will, and far worse." Eventually, he will start to enjoy it—very much, like a pure sadist. Carolina will take a break for a few days. She has been tortured enough and needs to regain her strength in solitary.
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I 've reworked scene 30-a offhand. Here's the alternate nude version, plus a slightly misted background in the distance.
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Carolina L.'s Ordeal
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