Yvonne in trouble (10 parts - ideas and feedback appreciated)

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Part 5: The party begins

After they stripped the young doctor Yvonne, leaving only her white underwear, Ramirez asked the other officers to leave the room. He wanted to be alone with her. He made sure that the girl's hands were tightly tied behind the chair and said to them,
"Don't complain, I know that Yvonne is the best snack we have in the building right now, you'll get a bite too, but be patient for a bit."
“Ok senior Ramirez, have fun, see you later”.
“Ok guys, feel free to take a few pictures of her body for the time being”.

Yvonne had always dreamed of becoming a doctor. She studied hard in Germany, worked long hours, and finally landed a job in her homeland. However, her dreams turned into a nightmare when she was kidnapped from her own home by the group of armed men.

They closed the door, and Ramirez sat across from her.
"Before the torture, I want to talk a little, baby," he said. "A general conversation, what do you say?"
"What did I do to you? All I tried to do was save your life as a doctor, and I succeeded," she replied. "You beast, aren't you afraid of God?"
"Hahaha, since you're an anarchist, communist, radical, atheist, feminist, veg, and who knows what else, are you now invoking God?"
"I did my duty as a doctor, I could have left you to die. Why should I pay for it this way?"
"Because you're pretty as hell."

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"I know that despite being a leftish cunt, you haven't been involved in any anti-government movements yet. But you could have, after all it's only been 6 months since we took power, maybe you didn't have the chance. You know, I got very turned on when I was studying your police file and found this photo of you from the days of democracy. Here you were very young, 18, just graduated from school and getting ready for university in Berlin. You thought you were doing something with that jerk of a former boyfriend of yours, with the activism in the anti-war riot rally." My colleagues should have caught you and beaten both of you to a pulp, but you played it safe. We had a fucking democracy back then." Yvonne cried as she remembered the excitement and hope she had felt that day. She and Josh had felt like they could change the world, and for a moment, it seemed like anything was possible.


"Let's continue our little conversation," Ramirez said and began to caress her legs with one hand while holding his dick with the other.
"If you saw me on the street, would you turn around to look at me? Would you think that we could become lovers?"
"I'm close to 60, an overweighted whale, ugly, uneducated, a fascist pig. You're 26, a scientist, beautiful as an angel. But we could be a suitable couple, don't you think?"

Yvonne was crying bitterly and whispered: "How long will you enjoy this sick game? Start doing to me whatever you want to do."

Ramirez continued to touch her and said,
"As long as I want, baby. You're mine."
Another twenty minutes passed, during which Ramirez laughed sadistically, ate pizza, belched, blowed his smoke in her tearful face, and grabbed Yvonne's soft body with his sweaty hands, asking her disgusting questions.

Then Yvonne thought of how to make him lose his cool, to provoke him to shoot her before the real torture begins. She gathered as much saliva as she could in her mouth and spat on him, the phlegm going into Ramirez's nose.
"Do you think I can be disgusted by your saliva, babe? Not at all. "But anyway, it's time for physical torture, for the electric shocks”.

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The shocks lasted, with the necessary breaks, for fifteen minutes. Yvonne saw something even more horrible. The torture was overseen by Dr. Borges, a colleague of hers from the hospital who she had no idea was also a doctor of the police. She knew him as a genial guy, devoted to the medical science and to his wife.
The pain she felt all over her body was terrible, and the whole world collapsed when she saw Borges examine her with a stethoscope (without forgetting to fondle her breast and belly just for taking pleasure) and give instructions, "The hoe is healthy and strong, continue freely, it's safe to increase gradually the voltage."
When Ramirez finished torturing Yvonne (while standing closely over her head the entire time during the electric shocks), they took off the electrodes from her nipples, she was almost unconscious from the electric shocks. He unzipped his pants and began to masturbate. In three minutes, he ejaculated big loads of sperm all over in her face. She fainted again. The sick cop spread with his fingers sperm to her dry and burned-out lips...
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Part 6: High-ranking visitor

As Yvonne slowly regained consciousness, she felt a burning sensation throughout her body due to the electrotorture and an overwhelming thirst. Desperate for some moisture, she felt someone pour water onto her lips and eagerly tried to drink it, unaware that it was Ramirez's sperm.

Despite her inability to move from the electric shocks, she remained bound hand and foot, treated as if she was the most dangerous criminal in the country rather than an innocent and delicate girl who weighed only one third of Ramirez's size.

Unable to make out their conversations, Yvonne only caught a snippet of dialogue from Doctor Borges: "I have to admit that, even though we don't cross paths every day because we work in different departments of the hospital, I had imagined her and everything that is happening now and will happen in the future." Ramirez let out a guttural "Mmmmm" in response.

Slowly, everyone left the room after giving her some water and loosening her handcuffs. Yvonne spent the rest of the night tied to the table, and approximately every hour (as far as she could tell), a different guard came by to give her water. She urinated on herself, naked.

Many hours passed, it must have been morning, when many guards came and lifted her up, making her take a shower. Yvonne felt utterly violated as she was forced to shower in front of the guards, their lewd comments ringing in her ears. She wanted to scream, to fight back, but she knew it would only make things worse for her. They made her scrub every inch of her body, their eyes following her every move.

Yvonne was disoriented and exhausted, her body aching from the shocks and the restraints. She had no idea where they were taking her, but she knew it couldn't be good.

As she was pushed into the room, she saw the same two soldiers who had stripped her yesterday night, standing there, looking at her with a mixture of amusement and malice. Ramirez was there too. She stood there, naked and vulnerable, waiting for them to make their move. She was sure they were going to rape her, and the thought made her want to vomit.

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But to her surprise, they only limited themselves to groping her. It was still painful and humiliating, but it wasn't as bad as she had feared. After a few minutes, they stopped and blindfolded her with a cloth. She was left alone in the room, with only the sound of her own breathing for company. The fear of what was to come was almost too much to bear.

In a few minutes, someone entered the room, which the young doctor could not see due to the blindfold. He did not speak to her at all, he raped her three times within an hour, letting out terrible grunts of satisfaction. But he did not speak, nor did he curse at her.

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When this terrible ordeal was over, Yvonne was bleeding from her vagina. Her colleague, Dr. Borges, came in, took care of her, and gave her clothes to wear. Yvonne was in terrible pain. "You are a doctor and I thought you were a good person. Are you not ashamed to be working with the junta?" she asked. "Fuck off, you bitch," replied Borges. "It's not enough that you hate our government, now you're giving me orders too." "I'm here to show every officer the limit of their interrogation subject's endurance, if you think about it, I'm performing a function." "And let me tell you something, little whore; You had the honor of being fucked by a very high-ranking member of the government, a minister, but I won't tell you who. That's why we blindfolded you, so you wouldn't recognize him. "

Υvonne then realized who had raped her. She had heard from friends at the hospital that the vice president of the government, a terrible fascist, personally raped the most beautiful female rebels. She recalled his face as she had seen it in the newspapers and felt nauseous, while the bleeding in her vagina had not completely stopped. Surely Ramirez had offered her as a gift to the minister, he had sent him photos and videos of the new arrests, and also gave “good recommendations” about Yvonne…
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I wrote parts 4-6 today, I hope you found them somewhat interesting.
I think I will send part 7 of Yvonne's story in about one week.
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