yyy02 wrote: ↑Sun Mar 06, 2022 5:20 pm
skullchaser wrote: ↑Thu Mar 03, 2022 8:39 am...My custom is out!...
WhiteRose, CRY_OGS120_comp1.jpg
I enjoyed it, maybe a little more than I anticipated:
Picks:
Cry's body is just fantastic. Liked the sequences where she is raised by White Rose, from standing aoh into the tiptoe/fully stretched position, multiple times. Also liked that you specified a spreader bar between her ankles.
Like how she shakes just a little during the electro, to make those breasts swing and sway just a teeny, exciting bit.
White Rose seems very relaxed during her lengthy dialog, and moving around Cry during "the experiment".
Nits:
The peeing scene is cool, but could have had better continuity. They don't set it up correctly and it could have been scripted a little cleaner, imo. I think the editor Alex is using is decent and actually uses reference points/events for continuity, so they probably did the best with what they had.
Maybes:
I wish I understood Russian so I knew what she's saying. (Not Cruel World's responsibility)
Maybe could have used heavy/gasping breaths by CRY immediately after the electro.
I wish White Rose had done a little more breast/nipple fondling, but that may have been out of character for the Dr. Squalo character.
Well done, skullchaser!
I forwarded your review to Alex and CRY, along with my comments. Here are their responses, if you're interested:
Alex:
Dear friend!! We tried our best. And I'm glad you liked everything. But the small nuances that you especially like should be explained to us in advance. Let's say I could significantly lengthen the scene when CRY wet herself. I could, in principle, provide at least a whole liter of urine. But I decided that it would be somehow unnatural for a small young girl. This is rather, in my opinion, typical for an adult man who had drunk a lot of beer before.

But if you had clarified, I would have done so. And the White Rose could do nipple caressing for at least half an hour.

But in any case, I hope that we will make many more films for you.
CRY:
Hello dear friend!)
I'm glad for your message!)
I'm nice that they write nice things about me!))
And I'll take into account the comments!)
I would really like to make even more interesting films for you!)
All the best !)
So, for the next film I'm going to specify that the victim should be raised and lowered and raised, off and on, so that I/we can enjoy seeing CRY's muscles stretched over and over.

More breast fondling, and definitely the deep hard breathing after each electrocution scene. The urine thing is almost a necessity at this point.