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[Ed2]

Ed2, I read the story last night while in bed. The images are very arousing. You are such a talented writer. Your descriptions are so vivid that I can imagine being in the scene watching. I am certainly glad that I was not Shannon. My god that would hurt!

Thank you, Laura. Vivid and arousing is the goal, breast whipping the means. I can't imagine reading this as a woman, but that leads me to ask something. I am purely winging it when I try to imagine the feminine response to my scenarios. So any personal gender perspective would be appreciated. Could defiance be warranted? Is embarrassment as powerful as I make it? Are Shannon's internal dialogues believable? Her reactions? I try to improve with each story.

I write what I do to indulge Star Trek holodeck fantasies if I had one. I've always been good at stringing words together, but it's ironic that violent sadistic porn is the only way I can share that now that college essays are far in the past.

[Laura]

Ed2, In western society in a woman's breasts represent more than just milk machines for babies. Speaking from experience I have found that a majority of men see women with large and firm breasts and in some cases even saggy ones as more desirable sexually than women with small or thin breasts. Those of our sex with small breasts use lift and padded bras to give breasts more size and rounded shape and show cleavage and even have expensive breast implant surgery to appear more sexually appealing to men. This is pretty common knwledge and this is very evident in your story that the men in the pub are attracted to barmaid Shannon because of the shape and size of her bosom not her lovely face or hair color.

In high school and even in college it was obvious that girls with well developed bosoms seem to attract the boys. Not being well endowed but still very pretty I lost out to other less facially attractive girls who had larger breasts. Even though as I aged my body filled out and my breasts became larger I resented the fact that in my youth my heart was broken when the boy I loved dumped me. When I read your stories about whipping and beating the breasts of girls like Shannon I take some perverse pleasure in reading your story.

My question to you Sir, is why you do write focused on breasts and about beating them bloody? Do you have a reason that can be explained. I think our sexual fantasies all have some trigger event and are not just a matter of brain development, genetics or hormones.

I think that were my breasts whipped and beaten as severely as Shannon's they would never fully recover either their shape of smooth skinned texture. They would be ruined beyond recovery especially the nipples.

[Ed2]

Ed2, In western society in a woman's breasts represent more than just milk machines for babies. Speaking from experience I have found that a majority of men see women with large and firm breasts and in some cases even saggy ones as more desirable sexually than women with small or thin breasts. This is pretty common knowledge and this is very evident in your story that the men in the pub are attracted to barmaid Shannon because of the shape and size of her bosom not her lovely face or hair color. In high school and even in college it was obvious that girls with well developed bosoms seem to attract the boys. When I read your stories about whipping and beating the breasts of girls like Shannon I take some perverse pleasure in reading your story.

My question to you Sir, is why you do write focused on breasts and about beating them bloody? Do you have a reason that can be explained. I think our sexual fantasies all have some trigger event and are not just a matter of brain development, genetics or hormones.

I think that were my breasts whipped and beaten as severely as Shannon's they would never fully recover either their shape of smooth skinned texture. They would be ruined beyond recovery especially the nipples.

Guilty as charged. I tried to understand why I should be so turned on by breast whipping for a very long time and ultimately just gave up and accepted it as a reality. I was always fascinated by torture, then hit puberty when Playboy's were it for illicit visual stimulation, so breasts became the focus for the torture imaginings. Whenever I saw some Playboy picture of a girl in a position that could be the result of tying, usually AOH or flat on the back, I immediately added the fetters and the situation. So no, there was no "trigger event" that I remember and I tried for years. I stopped caring why, it's just always been this way.

I play fast and loose with physiological reality. In Shannon's case, there is very little blood, just very painful skin irritation and bruising. I often like to save my victims for some return visit, leading to a few sequel stories. Reading Shannon as a kind of Schadenfreude never occurred to me, but interesting.

[Laura]

To some women their breasts define their femininity and are their most prized body part so a man hurting and marking them is very traumatic . I venture that some would prefer you whip their sex than their breasts. I carry them every day they are just bags of flesh and don't think about them having a sexual appeal except during sex when they certainly become a very important erorgenous zone especially the nipples but when I was young I prized them like the crown jewels much like some men think of there penis and testicles. They are partly what my husband was attracted to when he met me and enjoyed playing with them. He called them his "fun bags".