@rupert - Thank you for your comment, so glad that you appreciate my endevours to be as cruel as possible in the suffering of a female body - so much that describing it in action would maybe even to much to bear (in which I of coourse mean, impossible to read it with one hand occupied and not reaching the highpoint before'hand').Rupert_137 wrote: ↑Mon Jul 22, 2024 9:03 am A modern torture story in a very special presentation - a short prologue sends the poor victim to hell, but we learn the details below as an autopsy report and conversation between a pathologist, prosecutor and detective...
An interesting idea for a story that was implemented intensively and appealingly
Of course, the pathologist's autopsy report on the dead victim creates distance - but without this distance, the many cruelties described would hardly be bearable so compact in just one story.
There is an interesting twist at the end, the story comes full circle, detective and prosecutor belong to the perpetrators themselves!
Good idea, cleverly implemented... Keep it up!
Rupert
Appreciate the fact that you show that you really read it, by including summarizing details. Many thanks for the encouragement, I'm not sure if I can surpass the cruelty of this story...but the development of the art, after all, lies in perseverance, not perfection!
If you have any suggestions for what you'd like to read, please do tell! I love the inspiration!
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