Story Ideas and Writing Style

[EroticaWriter]

Hello A/all

Yes, I am new here! So far I am loving the community of like minded people who enjoy the darker, more sinister, side of kink.

I am would love to contribute to the community, but I wanted to "take the pulse" of the readers to understand what you want to see rather than just writing things that may not appeal to you, the GIMP reader!

When you read dark erotica, do you prefer it to be bounded in reality or exploring the possibilities not held back by biology, physics and time? Do you like historical settings or modern day? (or future, for that matter)

Do you prefer first person from the girl's perspective or do you want to read it from another character's viewpoint - say her tormentors? or do you like it in the "take a step back and see the world from the third person" way of telling stories.

Is there a preference for men tormenting women or do you like a mix of women tormenting other women as well?

On that point, do you care about a good character development or do you more want suffering and skip the fluffy bits in the middle. Character motivation can be simple or complex.

Do you like to read fan fiction? Would you like to read a story about a girl shooting her first torture porn video? Would you like a sexed up kinky version of a popular show?

Would you be interested in providing story prompts for me to write? An idea or an image you have that demands more exploration or just a fucked up thought you have had since you were a teenager, but are afraid to put out to the world.

I would love to write what you - the GIMP community - enjoys. Essentially there are no limits to what I can come up with. I do not do ageplay scenarios, but everything else is on the table.

Think of this as your chance to Dom me, in the creative world.

Feel free to PM me if you do not want to post your ideas in public.

I look forward to exploring all of our ideas and perverse pleasures!

[Rupert_137]

Hello EroticaWriter,

Nice that someone reports here and not just reads...
Also some feedback to posted stories would be appreciated...

You ask a lot of questions about preferences, but tastes and expectations are very different.
IIt's great when you can write about anything and with different writing styles...
But my personal advice would be: Start to write about your own ideas and in your own stile, you'll be the most authentic. Spontaneous ideas are the best

[Ralphus]

When you read dark erotica, do you prefer it to be bounded in reality or exploring the possibilities not held back by biology, physics and time? Do you like historical settings or modern day? (or future, for that matter)

Personally, I prefer realistic fantasies. Something I can identify with, like a home intrusion, rather than aliens attacking the girl with tentacles, for instance. Historical or modern day doesn't really matter as long as it's something I can believe.

Do you prefer first person from the girl's perspective or do you want to read it from another character's viewpoint - say her tormentors? or do you like it in the "take a step back and see the world from the third person" way of telling stories.

My favorite stories usually involve telling it from the female's perspective, so we can understand the fear and the pain she is experiencing first-hand, although there are good examples from other perspectives as well.

Is there a preference for men tormenting women or do you like a mix of women tormenting other women as well?

I think it's more realistic to have the man be the bad guy, although I like this angle a lot, too: the man as the primary villain, but with his girlfriend cheering him on and tormenting the victim along the way. There's something about women turning on their own that's appealing.

On that point, do you care about a good character development or do you more want suffering and skip the fluffy bits in the middle. Character motivation can be simple or complex.

Personally, I prefer some buildup to the story before the actual abuse begins. It justifies the motivations of the characters and gives the scenario a more realitic bend. Again, it all goes back to realism and believability.

Do you like to read fan fiction? Would you like to read a story about a girl shooting her first torture porn video? Would you like a sexed up kinky version of a popular show?

Write what you know, or whatever you are feeling. If you are passionate about the story, it will likely be better.

Would you be interested in providing story prompts for me to write? An idea or an image you have that demands more exploration or just a fucked up thought you have had since you were a teenager, but are afraid to put out to the world.

I'm not really a writer, but I'll read whatever you come up with. Good luck to you.

[EroticaWriter]

Write what you know, or whatever you are feeling. If you are passionate about the story, it will likely be better.

Thank you for such great input!
I have a few ideas already in the works, but i wanted to put my heart, soul... and other parts.... into it!

I'm not really a writer, but I'll read whatever you come up with. Good luck to you.

You are awesome!

Thank you Sir!!!

[Anya_N]

Hi EroticaWriter!
It's actually been a long time since I've been on here. I love torture fiction and I'm just as interested in writing it as I am in reading it. It's great to see other writers' takes on various scenarios and torture methods. It helps me to enhance and rethink my own ideas.

I like all sorts of scenarios. I think my favorites though are interrogation and punishment. I like the addition of some unique aspects to well-known tortures. For example, a woman whipped on a wooden horse has ropes bound around the base of each breast, the other ends of which are secured to her wrists, so that when she moves her arms, she tortures her breasts. Find a way to add a rope between her legs, or chain, and you've got something truly excrutiating. Find a way to add weights to her breasts at various intervals, and you got me hooked. Add a special salve or cream designed to irritate the skin to the point of painful torment, and bingo.

I also love the escalation of torture. For example, in this scenario, the whips would be mild enough to tenderize. Add a possible sunburn? Then add slightly more cruel whips, and finally the most vicious ones, and I think the victim would be begging for death.

Which brings me to another aspect I like: Driven to the point of begging for mercy, but not be given any, and instead either continue on as it is, or have it get worse. Lately I've liked the idea of keeping on a steady course, rather than have it get worse right away. Psychologically I think it makes the victim believe her cries don't make any difference. I like this particularly in slave scenarios. I always got annoyed that when a slave begged their Master/Mistress for mercy, it was granted. Having it be denied reaffirms the Master/Mistress's control over them.

I also love repeating tortures. For example, having a victim tortured on the rack, refusing to give in, experiences a few other tortures over a few more days, then is placed back on the rack, and then have the victim return to the rack the very next day, this time with the addition of the pear and nipple torture.

Something else I really love is the idea of testing the victim's pain threshhold before they are even spoken to. I love the idea of a victim being subjected to several different methods of torture over a number of days without having anyone say a single word to her. Then, the tortures that she struggled the most under are used for interrogation. If I could write a perfect example of this, an American spy is sent to infiltrate a foreign dictatorship's government organizations and facilitate a coup. Little does she know that her own mentor has betrayed her, and is instructing the Commandant behind the scenes about how to deal with her. She's stretched on the rack, fully clothed. Then, she's removed and the next day, she is naked in another room and bound AOH with legs spread. She's whipped from behind, without having any idea of who is doing it. Little does she know it's her mentor himself. He knows exactly where to strike her back and with what specific whip. She's then taken to another room the next day and some other torture happens... a few more of these instances, then she's back on the rack. She's stretched longer this time. Then, the next day, she's whipped again, and the pattern continues, until she is worn down enough that she understands the pattern of her torture, and starts to be terrified of the various rooms she is directed to. Then, she's taken to the rack and tortured again, this time with the first words being said to her. A single, simple question. Due to her training, she knows she cannot answer, or else there's a likelihood that once she starts answering questions, she'll never stop. The saem question is asked multiple times, and she's shocked with electricity for each resulting silence. She'd never been subjected to electrotorture before. As it gets worse, she finally answers this simple question, and the Commandant moves on to another. That's tghe way I'd love this story to go... and her mentor's betrayal isn't revealed to her until she has already broken.

I enjoy all kinds of perspectives when it comes to the writing style. As long as the writer is talented with their chosen POV technique, I have no problem with it.

I enjoy fan fiction in the right circumstances. I recall a great fanfic of Charmed where the witches were tortured by the inquisition for the crime of witchcraft. Still remains a favorite story, especially since they only caught two of them, and the witches had to resist under torture the temptation of revealing the other's whereabouts, which one of them failed. I also love alternate takes, for example an idea of the Hunger Games where Katniss would be caught and tortured after the Rebellion's defeat. I've never read a story like that but I'd personally love to see one written!

As a writer and reader of literature in general, I appreciate stories that involve high stakes regarding torture. A Pagan struggling not to reveal the names of others in her group against Christian persecution, a rebel fighting to keep the secrets of her group's activities against a tyrannical dictatorship, a lesbian protecting her lover from homophobic punishments for the crime of existing, take your pick.

Overall, as a writer myself, I think the best advice I can give is to write what makes YOU happy first and foremost. Personally, I'd rather write a story that I enjoy reading and writing, than write something I don't enjoy. If any of these above ideas strike your fancy, that's great! If you're interested in collaborating, or if you'd like me to request a story written specifically according to what I personally want from you, then I'll be happy to do that. But see what you think of these ideas above.

Anya

[gamblers1000]

you can check out the stories database my 2 favorites are Melissa by ed and liberty by King Diocletian
https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... elissa.htm
https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... iberty.htm

[Rupert_137]

I like the idea of presenting personal favorites here.

For me, an outstanding story should be integrated into an exciting and varied overall story, further describe the action and experience from different perspectives. Hardly anyone masters it like King Diocletian, my personal favorite is his Aelia story, a bandit queen in ancient Judea who is betrayed and must feel the cruel revenge of the Romans and her own priests...

https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... /aelia.htm

Aelia

I would also like to present my favorites from Ed: "Sofia, a Pirate's Punishment". As usual with him, the focus is on whipping and torturing the big breasts of the innocent victim, but here too there is an appealing background story and in addition, there are great pictures by WillieJ

https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... shment.htm

Sofia - Example

Finally, I would like to present a very special story by Fritz "The Baroness". It's a story that spans centuries in five intertwined episodes - varied and exciting, but not immediately easy to understand. I actually rearranged the chapters of this story chronologically (find the five year numbers and then copy the chapters one by one) before enjoying reading it

https://ralphus.net/special/stories/mor ... roness.htm

The Baroness - Fritz

[vladdt]

I also love the escalation of torture. For example, in this scenario, the whips would be mild enough to tenderize. Add a possible sunburn? Then add slightly more cruel whips, and finally the most vicious ones, and I think the victim would be begging for death.

Which brings me to another aspect I like: Driven to the point of begging for mercy, but not be given any, and instead either continue on as it is, or have it get worse. Lately I've liked the idea of keeping on a steady course, rather than have it get worse right away. Psychologically I think it makes the victim believe her cries don't make any difference. I like this particularly in slave scenarios. I always got annoyed that when a slave begged their Master/Mistress for mercy, it was granted. Having it be denied reaffirms the Master/Mistress's control over them.

Hi Anya!
I love your taste! Too bad I'm vary bad in writing in English. And too bad Russian sadist's site Desadov is down now. I wrote couple of stories there and I hope they were liked by sadism lovers.

One of if the rich woman in Middle ages (or fantasy world). She sneaked out incognito to the port. To hire infamous mercenaries, who's band right now resting between battles and causing all sorts of troubles. They especially famous for cruelty to the woman. Rape, tortures, killing even cannibalism. When she meet them, she have no chance to speak. They just grabbed her, gagged her, and started to pull over her dress. She almost get raped. But their leader stopping his man, suspecting that she is not just a local harlot, and can get them into troubles. So she didn't lost her mask and identity. She is a wife of local governor. She telling the leader that she want to hire them. But first, she asking if their reputation is real? If they really fried and ate woman? They are laughing and telling her story. When they captured one rich castle and wanted just quickly to rob it - they were surrounded by local army forces. Army begun the siege. They run out of food, so they really used owner's wife as a food. With laughing they explained to our heroine that owner's wife was still alive when they start to cook her in the yard. And her screams were perfectly heard by army forces. But before, they tortured and raped her the whole week. Heroine asked - why? Isn't she gave all riches and secrets just under the threat of torture? They laughed again, and confirmed that her husband before getting killed tell them everything. But they mercilessly tortured his wife for another week - just because they love to torture woman.

Heroine of the story was in shiver, but she told them that this is exactly what she need them for. And she will pay them very big sum of gold. She told that she hiring them to torture very beautiful but strong woman - her sister. She will be ready for them in the dungeon of abandoned monastery. She will be already tied up, naked and wait for them in the cell. There is already restored and refurbished torture chamber. With some good food and wine. So they can enjoy the victim as much as they like for two days. But on two conditions. First - they should never remove her gag and leather hood. They will never knew who they are torturing, and she should never be able to try to bribe them. And second condition...

She asked them about professionalism as a torturers. Can they break her for good? Can they not only make her sign the papers where she willingly renounce an inheritance. But make her so scared and broken, so she will never even will try to tell anyone about her tortures and humiliation! So she never will think about any revenge. They confirmed that they can make her beg to be a slave to anyone who will came after and free her. She told them, that she so hate her sister, so she want to be there, and see her scream, shriek and beg for mercy! But she can't. She will pay them more, if they will find a way to torture her with hot iron and fire, but without a visible traces outside dress. And this is second condition. Her husband will return in on month after those tortures. And he should not suspect anything. They anyway didn't sleep together, so he will see her only dressed. But she will love later to her their stories how she was burned and screamed like hell. They agreed to find a way to burn her. Like put her hanging above the grill. Or use thin iron rods on her tits, so marks will be very small. She paid them half of the gold and told them where they tomorrow can find a victim. Another half - in two weeks if everything will works as a planned.

At night she ride alone to this monastery. She put all her dress in the saddle bags and sent the horse back to home. She went in to the dungeon naked, already scared but excited. She cuffed her leg to a chain from the wall. Put on the leather hood with ring gag. This gag will allow to rape her in the mouth and scream as she wants, and water tortures... She cuffed her arms behind her back. And roll over couple of times on dusty floor, to make as she struggled and fought. And she started to wait her inevitable torture.

[Anya_N]

Molodyets, Vladdt! Khorosho!

I'm not Russian myself, but my primary focus as a writer is on Russian characters, particularly a family saga that revolves around two brothers (half-brothers) in figure skating at the turn of the 21st century. The catalyst for the events is the kidnapping and torture of Evgeni Krylov, an 18-year-old whose only crime was falling in love with the wrong girl, the daughter of a mafiya boss who was also a figure skater. Zhenka suffers PTSD as a result of his ordeal for the rest of his life, but the torture is mild considering the circumstances. The men were ordered not to be too brutal toward him because an equally powerful mafiya boss, financially invested in Zhenka's career, (though Zhenka doesn't know it) intervened and authorized only certain kinds of torture which would not hinder his skating.

Of course, this is not anything this forum would be interested in since it is for female victims alone, and I doubt you'd be interested, but in case you are, I figured I'd let you know.

I have been wondering if certain aspects of the torture and other aspects would be realistic, as well as cultural and religious aspects of Evgeni's life. For example, Evgeni is a devout Russian Orthodox Christian, faith instilled in him by his father, Aleksei Ilyich. When Evgeni is kidnapped, he spends some of the car ride praying and focusing on memorized Bible verses to give himself comfort. Then, when he's brought to the old gulag, the lead torturer mocks him for willingly fasting according to church doctrine, even though his career would have granted exception. It had been about 12 hours since he'd eaten anything, which was merely lunch. The man offered sausage on buttered bread, but took it away when he realized what day of the week it was, and thus Zhenka could not eat either the bread or sausage. When he's in the chair being tortured an hour or so later, the torturer has Zhenka's hands behind him and behind his neck, basically secured to the garrotte around his neck. As he's tortured, Zhenka can't help but struggle, choking himself repeatedly. After a while, his hands are secured in front of him, and the torturer (Yuri) wraps one of the three crosses Zhenka wears around his neck around his hands. He burns Zhenka with cigarettes until Zhenka can bear no more, then jerks his hands down, breaking the cross. Yuri forces him to break the other two crosses, including his baptismal cross, given to Zhenka by his uncle Fedya who died in Afghanistan when he was little. Then, Yuri burns the crosses in acid right in front of him.

That's just a sample of the first torture scene, which lasts six hours, followed by a two hour break, then a more intense session but not sure how long that particular session would be... I know they won't shock himn with electricity for several days at least, and he's also sodomized and raped repeatedly throughout his ordeal which lasts 96 days total.

I'm actually not writing this chronologically; the torture scenes are sprinkled in the form of flashbacks due to anxiety and panic attacks, as well as nightmares. I've always thought that Zhenka would never say a word of what happened, despite his father, a victim of torture by the KGB when he helped someone defect to the West in the late '70s, insisting that talking about his ordeal is the only way to find a semblence of peace.

Anyway, like I said, this forum is not the place to share this story. But if you are interested, I can share some things with you.

Re: your own writing, if you're interested in a collaboration, I could edit your English writing so that it better. It would be a pleasure. I could even do that for stories you wrote on your own.

Spasiba bolshoe! I look forward to hearing more from you!

Poka!
Anya`

[vladdt]

Hi Anya. How does this looks via Google translate? I hope AI did it's job. I actually wrote this short story to the guy who wanted to make 3D comics about modern girl and Inquisition. But then we disagree in many points, so story is short. (And I don't have 3D model of my wife screaming like hell in flames. )


There has been a lot of controversy about the miniskirt. She didn't like minis, she preferred jeans or, in extreme cases, shorts. But I insisted. Is it possible to refuse the spectacle of a girl struggling under torture, sparkling legs in pantyhose from under her skirt? The tights are necessarily black, with white panties underneath. The skirt is so short that the panties should be visible any time you try to bend over. After some argument, the wife relented.

The travel agency didn't promise anything. But it was more like insurance against unforeseen claims. To start the adventure everything was done so, that the Inquisition would not even have the thought that it was not a witch in front of them. The victim was thrown right in front of the noses of the city guards or villagers. With all the attendant effects. An ominous laugh, a broom in the hands or between the legs, a fire and a coven in the opening portal. The strange and sexy clothes of the traveler should also have left no doubt. There were no exceptions, after a moment of confusion, the girl was seized, and it’s good if they didn’t immediately beat her until she lost consciousness. Another thing is that the agency did not guarantee anything after, especially that the victim would live to see the fire. But this was already the work of experienced executioners. What added to the piquancy of this adventure was the fact that my wife did not speak Spanish and could not confess to anything even if she wanted to. She could only shake her head or nod, randomly. And of course screaming in pain. This gave a special spice to torture.

I knew that cameras were filming from all angles. But as a husband, I couldn't watch her being tortured in real time. It was an additional humiliation for me. I knew that the viewers were already paying for the broadcast and enjoy any angle of torture of my beauty. And premium members could travel back in time disguised as locals for an additional fee. And at night, in the basement, for a good bribe, the executioners gave them the opportunity to rape my wife as they pleased. I, according to the contract (and my wish), could buy the full video for the full price only after she was burned. It will take a whole week to restore her body, so that will be the time when I can enjoy the view of her torment as a spectator.

And now for the first time I looked at the town square through the eyes of a spectator from the crowd. The truth is in a great place in the front rows. At first I heard periodic repeated cries of pain and only a few minutes later I saw the procession itself. The cart was pulled by one horse and it moved slowly. Whether from the severity of the load, or wanting to amuse the crowd with a spectacle. The wife sat on a bench in the back, oddly enough fully dressed. The executioners decided to burn the witch along with her clothes. True, the clothes were badly torn, and part of them was torn so that the girl was naked to the waist in front. Her hands were shackled at the shoulders, heavy iron bars, clamping the neck too. The stocks were fastened with short chains to two posts on the sides of the cart, which prevented the victim from deviating to the side or getting up. On her head was something like a metal harness, with a bit that did not allow the witch to speak or cast spells. But let her scream. What she did, periodically amusing the crowd.

An executioner was sitting on the front bench. He took heated tongs from the brazier and periodically burned my wife's small tits with them. Each time there was a hiss and a desperate, tormented squeal. The crowd accepted these cries with delight, whistling and applauding the mockery of the poor witch. There was almost no unharmed space left on the tender breasts of my beloved. The shirt was missing. I, with pleasure, remembered the beginning of her tortures. I did not see it, and it was a wonderful torment in itself - to know that my wife is now being brutally tortured, and I can only in the imagination to imagine what is being done to her. But a pal of mine who has a premium account sent me a lonely photo. On it, I saw that they began to burn her boobs with a red-hot iron right through this translucent shirt. It seems that only a rag remained of this shirt, which they could not pull even back properly on her tormented body. He also boasted in the photo caption that he was already in line for the basement. And that tonight he would beat and rape her. This was already a breach of contract. But added to me many hours of lonely delightful masturbation. He promised that after her burning he would visit and share his impressions.

The fire was built in the form of a large pile of logs, with brushwood in the middle. The firewood was dry, but since the witch did not formally confess, she was not to be strangled or suffocated by the smoke. She had to burn alive. When the cart stopped, it turned out that my wife could not walk on her own. The executioner released her from the stocks, she tried to get up, but her legs refused to serve her. This was not surprising. They broke her bones in a Spanish boot, and crushed her fingers on each leg. The executioner simply hoisted her over his shoulder, causing another groan of pain, and carried her to the woodpile. The sight was very piquant, because the short skirt pulled up so that it completely opened her tight ass. I was happy to see that the panties were in place. Pantyhose too, but they were torn from numerous tortures.

The crowd screamed with delight. The executioner placed the girl at the post and she fell to her knees with a groan. She couldn't stand. The executioner led her hands behind the post and tied them with a short rope. Then he passed the second rope under her shoulders, threw it over the ring driven into the top of the post and literally hung the girl's body over the woodpile. The skirt fell down, hiding the panties, but leaving the black rims of the tights exposed. I saw how her body trembled finely with fear and sweat trickles down her neck in thin streams. A long chain was nailed to the top of the post. The executioner began to wrap the helpless body with coils of this chain. After a minute of quality work, my wife was pulled tightly to the post, to the her slender ankles. The spectacle was amazing. I understood why people paid big money for such tours. It is incredibly hot to see the body of a modern girl, in a beautiful miniskirt, in such a medieval setting! Tightly chained to the post and ready to scream in pain in the flames. It was doubly exciting that it was the body of my beloved. It did not matter that her legs refused to serve, now the slender figure was held not only by a rope, but also by a chain that had stuck tightly into the body. The girl was exhibited for the audience in all its glory.
After admiring his work, the executioner open her blouse wider, and put her skirt up to waist, exposing her panties again. Crown screamed in delight again. The executioner descended from the woodpile. Everything was ready to the main event - burning.